Reviews for Left Behind |
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![]() ![]() I need to sleep... stop making these chapter so good that I have to keep reading! |
![]() ![]() I love this Draco! |
![]() ![]() You are a talented stroyteller! |
![]() ![]() I live this story. Should be sleeping not reading This! |
![]() ![]() It is so beautifully written and so realistic! |
![]() ![]() Welcome back author! Loving it and looking forward to more! Might even go back and read it again from the beginning while you edit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Forgot about the amazing french wand maker, i hope we get to hear from her again. |
![]() ![]() Woohoo! Here we go! Still love the wand, love the french wand maker, and love the way Draco was chosen. The way you describe it is lovely. I also forgot your love of the cliffhanger, although how I have no idea how, haha. Greyback is perfectly threatening in an unpleasant way, which is great. Bad rabid dog, bad! Somebody get Hermione a newspaper! |
![]() ![]() I am loving this. I enjoyed it a lot the first time, and I think you have done a nice job of enhancing what was already there. Poor Draco. Poor Hermione. So much more pain on the way, so much more frustration. I must give you a kudos for continuing to make me want to strangle the characters for realistic reasons. Thank you so much. |
![]() ![]() I am reasonably sure that I am enjoying this far too much. Everything is laid out very cleanly and tidily, I must say you continue to impress me with all the work you have done and continue to do. I like the additions, they feel very natural. Thank you so much for doing this. I love the way you handle Voldemort and Bellatrix, and I like the way her infatuation with him is dealt with. It reminds me strongly of Joker and Harley, the classic Batman the Animated Series version of their love, not the more recent versions. Only here, Voldemort has no sense of humour, and Bellatrix has close living relatives. *shudder* Well done, well done indeed. The chapter ends with no feeling of safety despite Moldyshorts leaving. I have chills! |
![]() ![]() I really respect the amount of work you have put in revamping these early chapters. I have to say, it's noticable, in a good way. I feel like you really tightened up and smoothed things out so much. It's nicely done, and I appreciate it so much. Thank you, thank you, thank you for doing this for your fans. You are amazing, and I know I am going to love reading the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() Wow. It's crazy to come back here after everything. I really like the additions, I think you did a good job expanding on Draco's situation before the arrival of the Snatchers. Making Lucius's abusive behaviour more defined from the beginning makes loads of sense for informing us of Draco's predicament, and helps clarify why Narcissa never intervened. One thing to note : spelling of 'potions' was misspelled as 'portions' when Draco is reading. It's one of those things that doesn't show up in spell check and is easy to miss, especially when it's only once. Apart from that, spelling and grammer look pretty decent to me, and I am looking forward to reading this story again. Do you want spelling errors pointed out to you going forward? I know you have been doing without a beta, which is why these updates are happening now. The first time around I didn't feel any need to criticise spelling errors knowing this, but now knowing that these have been edited already, I feel like I need to say something. You already did so much good work, I feel bad pointing out things you missed. I love this work so much, and I appreciate your efforts, so I will gladly keep my mouth shut if you find it irritating. I really am a big fan, and as a writer myself I totally get how easy it is to miss things when you are working, so I just want to emphasize that there is no judgement here, just observation. However, if you are interested having someone be a human spelling checker for you, I would gladly take on the task. It would honestly be my pleasure, and I can promise that I would serve with honour. If you would like to take me up on this, you know how to get in touch with me irl. No matter what, I want to thank you for writing this story in the first place. Reading it helped spark creativity in me that has fuelled a renewed love of fanfiction, and helped drive a surge of inspiration that has led me to writing my own huge original work. So from the bottom of my heart, thank you. |
![]() ![]() Woohoo! Okay, first of all, I am very excited to read this epilogue/continuation, and now hearing that you have been going over and re-editing the earlier chapters, it's almost going to be like starting over again! You do realize that I am now obliged to go back and review the changes chapter by chapter right? Oh the humanity! In all seriousness, I really am excited to see what you have done and changed in the earlier chapters. And I am quite pleased with what you have given us here in Chapter 47. You continue to provide everything I need in Dramione, and reading about the developments between the other characters makes me happy. Narcissa continues to impress me, and I cannot express how good it is to see Gred and Forge back together. Harry is finally realising how big a mistake has been made here, and Ginny is there ready to foster that realisation and hopefully be his backup against... sigh... Ron. I am keeping the faith here. Ron is really damn stubborn, but I was hoping for more improvement in his attitude. Baby steps I guess. Not complaining, canon Ron irritates the crap out of me from time to time too, hot headed git that he is, but it hurts to see him like this, at odds with everyone. Maybe Lavender is the answer to the problem? Someone else to pursue and fixate on instead of Hermione and Draco? I am sure you have a plan; you haven't disappointed me yet, and that I am so invested in this interpretation of Ron should tell you how much I am into this story. Gah! Okay, that's it for now. Thank you so much for continuing on this story for the audience; as a fan I feel blessed. Now, time to go all the way back to the beginning... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the PM, I am super glad you are backing and continuing it did feel in complete with the reunite now we can have a proper ending. Looking forward. |