Reviews for Yoru - Gamer Between Dimensions
Guest chapter 21 . 9/7/2021
Uhhh the switch seal he made is kindaaa discount thundergod lol

AND the hiraishin could do all the ameno-whatever could do but better

Plus the sharingan power, the immitation that the MC made could do it without seals

Ya shoulda just made upgraded the hiraishin To make a bounded area where you can teleport wherever,whatever and whoever the user wants in that death field

If you could make throwable kunai seals like those MCs gonna be a nightmare

It would be like a discount ope ope no mi with only teleporting and switching available

But it would be the ultimate uno reverse card ever

S- rank jutsu coming right at me? No u

You have an army? They fused underground now

With MC having flash time he would be the song “cant touch this”
Guest chapter 20 . 9/7/2021
Yorus like the avatar but with more free time to experiment with the elements

Hope he copies the dust release

HMMM wonder if yoru could just make a sand rasengan? It would probably have more weight to the spin if he did that
Like a sand blaster with steroids
Guest chapter 19 . 9/7/2021
Hope yoru puts a genjutsu on his personal hotspring

Although only ninjas with high water and fire afinity with moderate control would be able to use it since its artificial
Guest chapter 18 . 9/7/2021
Is yoru just that emotionless or is his gamers mind that buffed? Cuz gamers can feel emotion too ya know? Its just doesnt go to the panic threshold

They can feel anger and love too
Guest chapter 16 . 9/6/2021
I dont get why people bitch about gamers being too OP


The original gamer became strong within a freaking year of him getting his power!

The only reason why han jihan wasnt at the top yet was because the top was full or ARMIES AND GODS! PANTHEONS!

and the gamer is just one guy!
The Liar Who Lies chapter 2 . 9/7/2021
Partial memory loss on such specific (and very memorable) topics and people? Very specific because remembering a certain anime itself more than your own past is already too specific. Now that just sounds like an obvious and poor plot device. Well, good thing you showed it early enough for us to not be invested yet. See ya.
TropesBeDamned chapter 1 . 9/7/2021
Damn that chakra and Hp regen are off the charts.
x2leoj chapter 1 . 9/6/2021
Hmm this definitely seems to be based off the framework of Yami:The Gamer Cage, this is like a remixed version with significantly less typos and earlier in thetimeline.
ALAN chapter 3 . 8/28/2021
This doesn't seem badly done compared to other Gamer stories I have read. So the negative reviews are likely from people who don't like gamer stories or from a dislike of Danzo. A talented orphan would be grabbed by Orochimaru or Danzo and you are more likely to survive Danzo. Plus it seems like this might be an AU Danzo so I don't think it was a bad decision.
handwran chapter 33 . 8/29/2021
i really hope you end up writing more. I was so sad when I realized there wasnt gonna be a part 2 to this amazing story
Guest chapter 3 . 8/13/2021
look, the negative reviews you might have received are probably because the kid is 4, yet has full control of his emotions, has all five chakra element affinities, and is on the course for ANBU by the age of 6, or worse, 5.
EverRed chapter 3 . 8/11/2021
What is horrible about this chapter is how you try to Justify the teachers actions when all in all she just kidnaps children that barely know anything about life and tell them something that will change their life forever but she thinks is good which is fine but the MC is kissing her a*s when she kidnapped him so I hope she gets killed off otherwise Imm going to drop this no questions asked
Ahtu chapter 19 . 8/10/2021
He did note Rin's though... And I'd think 3 tails still has more chakra than Hashirama.

I thought he'd just feel too different, due to his emotional state.
killua196 chapter 33 . 8/10/2021
Ahtu chapter 1 . 8/7/2021
Vit and Wis/Int, are not really separate from Chakra/ENEGY/Energy. Chakra is the mix of spiritual and vital energies/stamina.

I know one excuse that could work though. If you limit both the minimum ENEGY levels, and the maximum to be relative to these other stats. Then it could simply be about chakra quality, something the Uzumaki are for example famous for. Or in other words density, in another sense. But if you ignore their relation, you'll be moving outside of the Narutoverse rules in a rather major way.
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