Reviews for Yoru - Gamer Between Dimensions
mac1010 chapter 23 . 1/3
why do u always make him act like hes barely winning
when he has more power then 99% people
then u go and change everyones power randomly so the mc will stay weaker
like whyyyyy
hes a mc with a gamer ability WE ALL KNOW hes gonna be overpowered so let him be for fuck sake
mac1010 chapter 22 . 1/3
holy fuck why did u drag this fight on for so long plus u gave him like a dozen abilities instead of 4
like he was a loser
mac1010 chapter 6 . 1/2
this whole first kill thing is wayyy to over dramatic
like gamers mind shouldve made it perfectly fine
but instead its like a whole chapter talking about loss of innocence
which is annoying. ur a shinobi and shinobi kill
thats it.
LettuceRead chapter 31 . 11/26/2023
Good story :)

Did you take inspiration from The Root of Darkness - Amorphis760?

Both are prodigy gamers, orphan, aloof, created Natural Healing/Angel's Breath, learn insanely quickly making Minato depressed, has a sister Mito Uzumaki, plans to travel to different dimensions etc. Must say that the stories are unerringly similar.
Lil Author Vert chapter 18 . 11/23/2023
thank god cannon didnt happen completely i eas about to be so upset
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2023
shit
Guest chapter 6 . 10/11/2023
I tried my best to read through this fic because I really love the gamer stuff but I just can't anymore. Going through 6 chapters was all I could do.
Riger82 chapter 33 . 10/2/2023
Chapter 32. I'll post here to tell you when the sequel starts.
Chapter 33. Not going to bother with a sequel.
Pvtcheeks chapter 12 . 9/8/2023
What?! Bro just shrugged a toad slidd’in down his throat and only got a little peeved
Pvtcheeks chapter 5 . 9/7/2023
Your authors note at the bottom of chapter five…was beautiful and I couldnt possibly agree more my mans.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/10/2023
To be honest, the main character is incredibly boring. There’s just no character to his character.
GloGang214 chapter 28 . 8/2/2023
big tits samui is smitten
GloGang214 chapter 23 . 8/2/2023
lol did he learn conquerors haki?
GloGang214 chapter 12 . 8/2/2023
it would be badass with a purple lighting cloak
GloGang214 chapter 11 . 8/2/2023
he should make madara purple lighting
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