I like it. Very virgin/whore. Ah, double standards...

That was REALLY good... Your imagery and description really took a hold of me, as well as the thoughts you placed through Anshii's mind...

I think this piece says plenty without adding much more to it, but I have to say I like the direction it took in expressing Anthy's realizations. Her purpose is also her trap; any desires she may have ultimately will lead to downfall in her own conscious mind.

Very interesting.