vcs123 chapter 1 . 10/22/2019
nice story
plz continue
plums chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
I despise amnesia stories.
Kamagong chapter 1 . 5/18/2019
What the fuck is a squeel/squeal? If you mean SEQUEL, then it's spelled S-E-Q-U-E-L. The story shows some promise, but you need to spell check and grammar check it a lot.
thunder18 chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
Great chapter Update soon
Bisaster chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
Meh I'd rather you focus on the other one, I'm not a big fan of this.
Magi Mari chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
i suggest you AVOID the never ending WBWL cliché of neglected Harry, spoiled brother (better yet why don't you make it a sister for a change that would've been adorable), sh*tty parents, manipulative Dumbledore, everyone worshipping Dumbledore and thinks he doesn't make mistakes.

Keep making the parents stand up to Dumbledore and his control, don't turn Dumbledore into another dumb control freak villain just make him a misguided idiot but means well.
tom123asdf chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
This is good, Please don't make it a Harry gets abused, neglected or forgotten fic, there's already enough of those.