Reviews for The Pretender
Nanyin chapter 6 . 11/25/2018
this so fast pace and devastating. KUDOS!
Snake-faced chapter 6 . 11/25/2018
I love this so much! I know unsaid that already, but I mean how can I not?
Sarabi95110 chapter 6 . 11/25/2018
Fix this chapter pleaseeeeeeeeeee
MusingAIR chapter 5 . 11/25/2018
I like don’t I still I don’t understand the name, are you going to make mention of the blood pack, that Dumbledore dared to do blood pack?
Snake-faced chapter 4 . 11/24/2018
Omg, this is so good!
Snake-faced chapter 3 . 11/24/2018
Umm... This is absolutely amazing, I love this and had no idea how much I needed this. Especially after watching fantastic beasts crimes of grindelwald. He's such an interesting character and I love your take on him!
Nanyin chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
Oh this will be a slippery slope of a tale. I'M iN!
LavaLamp96 chapter 1 . 11/23/2018
This promises to be a great story, can’t wait to see where you take it! Update soon !

(Also I know you said it hadn’t been beta’d but I did pick up on one spelling mistake? As Hermione enters the prison you make reference to the wards, ‘the wards had FALLED long ago’, I think it needs to changed to FALLEN?) but otherwise great work)
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