Reviews for A Matter of Family
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6
I just came across this story and I loved it. I'm going to check your other stories now. Great job
cara9001 chapter 4 . 7/14/2014
Fantastic story!
unfaithfullchild chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Okay here we go. The first few sentenses I had a hard time getting past for some reason. Their POV structure not the content.I couldn't put my finger on it. But the rest was gold. I do not usually like anything with V being at all submissive. I'd rather him die... BUT I could handle this cause he was able to control himself while Goku could not. Underline victory there in my eyes. ps the flame you got is rediculous... You can correct someone and not be rude about it...
Spacefille chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Guest - Thank you for bringing up a spelling mistake on a 9 year old fanfic. I fixed it for you. Unfortunately I did not and still do not have a beta, so these things happen. I hope you enjoyed the rest the fic, despite your obvious irritation at the first sentence. Feel free to let me know of any other spelling mistakes you come across so that I can correct them as well.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
"I know I will loose." GAAAAAAAHH! RIGHT OFF THE BAT! ITS "LOSE!" "I KNOW I WILL LOSE!" GET IT RIGHT!11!1!ELEVEN1!
Gilded Blue chapter 4 . 7/26/2007
Beautiful. I am absolutely astounded at how well written this is.
FluffysShai chapter 4 . 8/4/2005
nice ficcy nice and dark. i like your rape scene with vegeta not too detailed

luvs shai wolf
Goku's Mistress chapter 4 . 6/15/2005
You! Will there be more? I MUST KNOW!... But.. Goku and Bulla .. that would be.. oh so wrong. Goten and Bulla are good though! AWESOMENESS!
SaiyaPrincess18 chapter 4 . 10/26/2004
great job! is that the end? if so you should think about making a sequial!
Darke Angelus chapter 4 . 5/11/2004
Oh... My ... GOD!
That was the best Vegeta POV story that I've ever read! You catured his enigmatic, wry personality to absolute perfection. Rape and Yaoi aside, you handled it all so masterfully that nothing could be considered out of place: Vegeta protecting his daughter the only way that he knew how... It was very, very tragic. I only wish that he could have confided in Bulma about his tortures, but that damn pride thing no doubt would have interfered. You did an excellent job. Thanks so much for the great read!
violentartista chapter 4 . 1/9/2004
Woot. I like it. I'm not a huge fan of DragonballZ but the story was great and the heat thing so neat. Excellent job. Would like to see the theories expanded.
kari chapter 4 . 4/27/2003
PLEASE KEEP GOING! PLEASE!
Neko-jin Rogue chapter 4 . 4/26/2003
I just thought I would pop over from SJS and see just what you were talkin about when you posted. I just thought I would say "Hey, woman."

So... Hey, woman.

For this story...

It was wonderful. Absolutely great! It surprised me after you talked it down before. I like it so much! Just my type. It's going into my favorite stories list. Definitely. I loved this.

Your ever faithful Rogue, or as faithful as a rogue can be.
gelfling chapter 4 . 4/25/2003
...Wow. There's a conclusion. I'm stunned by the conclusion-ness...whoa...

But now VegetaxGohan play *best puppy-face(which isn't great)*, after the HUGE possibility in the last chapter (VEGETA WAS BLUSHING!), and all the great possible GotenxTrunks play...no gohanxvegeta-ness? Erm. I was hoping there would be one, but the near possibility of it, the toying with the idea of it, came out well too.

Don't suppose you can be persuaded into making an extra chapter, can you? I really did love Possession...Ah well. This one came out really great too...shame about the nc-17 restrictions...
tiand chapter 4 . 4/24/2003
this was very interesting to read.
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