Reviews for A Rose over a shallow grave
Combine117 chapter 35 . 8/23/2019
"Oh hi! It's Celeste again. Husband passed out due to his injuries"

*Soldier next to her*: Wait, wasn't he still awa-

"*Ignoring that* Thanks! Pets...well anyone that tried to apprehend this little bugger *pokes Poison Headcrab sitting on her lap* gets paralyzed and one wanted to deal with that.

Yeah. No one got hurt, thanks for asking.

I do wonder how the trip are going to deal with their current predicament."


Celeste sighs, "He should really take a break. So expect me to be here more often."

(The soldier and Combine: Really?/What?!)
RedRat8 chapter 35 . 8/23/2019
I suspect that the Big Empty messed with dimension tech, and cause both teams to land here on Earth. Also For Weiss in Yang's Body just call her Xue, which is snow in Chinese. And call Yang in Weiss's body Drachen, which is German for Dragon. Also fun chapter, I can't wait to see how the trio gets around Big Mountain. Hopefully Six gets some sweet new weapons here, like Energy Weapons.
Carre chapter 34 . 8/21/2019
1. Fun party (Thumbs Up!)!
Thanks for the invantetetion!
(Lifting up a pint of "Fullers, London Pride") Cheers for bright Future "polarn" (swedish for mate/pal/buddy, rougly) (no matter what you do).
2. ...You know. When I was younger, I used to play trumpet and klarinett.
Lost intresst in the trumpet.
My teacher in the klarinett quit (he pensioned/went to old for work) and the schedule was clashing with school and studies, so I had to give up on that.
...Miss it sometimes...
3. Keep Up the Good Work (Thumbs Up!).
Carre chapter 33 . 8/21/2019
1. Stupid qustion: Will we see more of Joshoua?
2. The Hug: ...Not gona lie, it nearly made me cry.
3. ...Better Luck next time next time Weiss (to kill Jaune)...
...Oh, and congratrulations Jaune and Pyrhha (to the future babies).
...Another thing wich, again, makes me wonder how the parents will react to...
4. Keep Up the Good Work (Thumbs Up!).
Carre chapter 32 . 8/21/2019
1. Battle: Ruby, wait for The Hoover Dam...
Or the Divide.
Or both...
2. Always felt the end of those two Choices was bitter (evacute or battle).
Evacute- Sorrows are still peacefull, but Zion dies.
Battle- Zions live but the Sorrows becomes a little violent (proboly worse if you dont convice Jshoua from shooting the Chieftan, never tested it).
3. Well, time to leave Zion.
Keep Up the Good Work (Thumbs Up!).
Carre chapter 31 . 8/21/2019
1. Hoi, sorry for not writing for a while (since you updated I mean).
The excuse is... kinda tooke a break myself in the Review-writing (still reading, just didnt had the energy writing).
2. Anyway.
a) Thanks for answers, Good to have you back and hoped you had a good vacation.
b) During mine own break, went to Uppsala and (lucky too) got mine hands on a Cthullu RPG: "Call of Cthullu, Investigator Handbook".
...Not sure this was the one you had in mind, but its looks intressting in any rate (its have "The Dunwich Horror" novell and some Lore, wich I love to read in RPGs books.
Heck, the Lore is the parts I mostly read in RPGs books... and I have a bunch.).
c) The charachters (mafia) "scource": The Mafia- games? (Carre nods) Can see that.
That said, thought you were using from "The Godfather" (the movies, never read the books) or "Once Upon a Time in America" (With Robert Di Niro) also as "scource".
...Just wannna cooment that, not sure were I am going with this...
3. Nora scary?
No matter how she acts (happy, sad, scary, etc), She is always scary.
4. More Joshoa (Thumbs Up!).
...Heck, some part of me see him as better teacher then Ozpin. (...Who I dont like, by the way, cant help it...)(Ozpin, I mean...).
5. The vision part reminds me of a Simpson-episode, there Homer eat some kinda mutant-"peppar" (...and barrels of beer...) and have some kinda vision...
...Less darker then Rubys though...
6. Message from BMT: ...Dont tell Weiss and Yang are going to share the same body?!
Note: Dont get me wrong, becuse its sounds HILOURIUS/FUNNY AS HELL if it did happen (Carre have a crazy grin).
7. The chibbi-flashback: ...Ok...
8. Keep Up the Good Work (Thumbs Up!).
leeconnor4297 chapter 34 . 8/19/2019
liked the show, and im glad the gangs all back together and im gonna guess that you had weiss and yang body swapped, cause I kinda got a body swap situation from the message Ruby got.
Crimson Weresloth chapter 34 . 8/16/2019
I fucking knew it! Combine get your man here, *I pull out a vox* Don Fluffles is here come in and kill them! And I was about to comment something wholesome to, damn you fucking cat, your worst then Feral Blake!
PS. I meant Lily was Pyrrha's grandmother not the twins, she would be a great grandmother. I should know I still have one.
Combine117 chapter 34 . 8/16/2019
*before Don Fluffles attacked*

Combine's head rested on a woman's shoulder, Celeste, on his lap a Tamed Poison Headcrab. He was out cold and half the soldiers were as well. Though some of them were still awake and idling around.

"Oh, hello. My husband forgot to mention me coming, so blame him."

The Headcrab chirped and her hand reached out to pet it.

"So I'll be reading his responses to your responses."

She took out a piece of paper.

"He said it was fun.

Yeah, he let them slow down after you said that.

Hopefully, it does."

She puts it away and the Headcrab jumped into her lap.

She smiles and pets it, eliciting a chirp.

"Creeper? man..." Combine muttered.


"Oh s***!" Combine and a few soldiers woke up.

"What's going on?" Celeste asked, standing up. The Headcrab hissing.

"HOLY S****. HE IS STILL ALIVE. I knew I miscounted."

*The gunfight ensues*
D1NGORED chapter 34 . 8/15/2019
No water and an alcohol serving event? That’s a breach of your RSA right there. And also a sucky move on your part. It’s the desert and you won’t have water? Cruel. But no in all seriousness this is a cool way to show fan appreciation.
RedRat8 chapter 34 . 8/15/2019
Great to see you be here as long as you are, great to see you here be this far mate. So rock on!
Phygmalion chapter 34 . 8/15/2019
Fun party! I've never been a guest of honor before - it's a new experience for me.. Don't worry, I'll concentrate my fire on Don Fluffles.

Seriously, this was fun. It's only the second time I've been included in a fic because of my reviews, and I get a kick out of it every time.

Dr. Mobius thanks you for offering to return his toaster, but his laser scorpions do a better job of preparing his toast, since they can simultaneously cut AND toast it with their claws and lasers. You're welcome to keep it, or give it to the Toaster in the Sink if you're disinclined.

Now, where's that cocktail? Irish cream and Jamaican Rum on ice, if I remember my order correctly. No, wait! Bad Don Fluffles, bad kitty! No Irish Cream for you!
Guest chapter 33 . 8/11/2019
Man these guys are getting more permanently settled in the Wastes.
Guest chapter 33 . 8/11/2019
Wow going to suck ass for Jaune and his child once Pyrrha meets her fate with Cinder when they get back, or worse case he loses both to Cinder during the fall if not born yet.
Guest chapter 33 . 8/11/2019
The way you wrote Blake is right. She is a little girl who does not truly understand the world and thinks she is always right.
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