|Reviews for Milton's Magistrate|
| Stacye White chapter 11 . 7/11
I have read all of the books you have published on Amazon, and really admire your writing. I do hope you will finish this story and publish it as well.
| eelarahs chapter 11 . 3/23
Just discovered this story, and I'm HOOKED! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/8
An interesting chapter! Cannot wait until John & Margaret meet again and for the Harvest Ball to take place. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Thanks for writing. Xx
| mencia chapter 11 . 2/28
This is a great North and South variation. There are marked changes in the story, yet the personalities of the main characters seem to fit in nicely with the original ones. Thank you
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/23
Enjoyed the update, the plot and writing are interesting and enjoyable
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/22
That sounds promisingly like we are focusing on the mystery part rather than the romance for a bit. Lovely! More of that, pretty please?!
Ok, I really don't want John to step down from being a Magistrate, I'd rather he'd get to do some interesting things to do as such. But we'll see.
I adore the idea of mother Hale to go to London without Margaret. Hopefully she'll cheer up!
Not too interested in the Ladies being catty, I'm afraid.
So, well, thanks for this chapter! Hopefully there's more to come :)
| 100recycled chapter 11 . 2/24
Fun fact: I didn't think Johns behaviour at the end of chapter 10 was unfriendly. I thought he was explaining, that he knows how scandal in the family feels. So I had expected a misunderstanding between Margaret and John here - but now he thinks himself, that he's reacted unfriendly. Soooo... I'm really curious, how this story will develop further. Nice twist to let the draper invite Margaret to the harvest ball.
| Poppy chapter 11 . 2/20
Can’t read like this can you make necessary changes please
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/20
Oh, hey, I am very exited to see that there is an update! However it seems there is a small formating error? Hopefully you'll be able to fix.
I am looking forward to reading this :)
| Libt1096 chapter 11 . 2/21
Julia ... so happy to receive an email with news of an update ! Chapter 11 is perfect ... shipping Mrs. Hake off to London to spend time with her sister is a great idea and of course a little Margaret / John tension adds to the intrigue. Looking forward to Chp. 12 !
| sari18 chapter 11 . 2/21
Thank you for the update.
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 11 . 2/21
I hope that Mr. Thornton don't give up on Margaret.
| ElizaG1 chapter 11 . 2/20
Hi! There’s formatting issues with the chapter- codes are appearing and make to hard to read.
| Jeslovsu2 chapter 10 . 2/11
Will there be any more chapters? This is really good writing! I’ve got no the of your kindle books! Plus the the other one with the short shorts in paperback! I hope you can come back and complete this. Thank you for your wonderful story telling!JS
| Deborah r chapter 9 . 2/8
I don't think we have a marriage here.