These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.

I love this story si mUch!
I almost cried.. you're a really great writer!

So, instead of taking one of the smartest and most talented meisters and giving her a position at the school to train new meisters, DWMA kicks her to the curb and cuts all ties, except social, with her. Plus, after apparently having been able to read Soul's mind the entire time, it takes Kid over a year to tell Soul that he is actually still Mama's weapon, nevermind that DWMA abandoned her and she has been unable to training for that year because Kid has been keeping Soul from her.

Wonderfully funny prose :)
Always love your stuff!

JUST SAW DEATH E CHEESE

The way you write is fantastically sort of laid-back, funny and very engaging to read. You inspire me to write!

God I missed the way you write soul and maka. Why am I crying rn

I screamed when Kid called Maka Soul's meister. Also, the group resonance made my day. And I appreciated the Brooklyn 99 reference!

Your characterization was spot on. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much!

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I love this. Because yeah, of course she would skip her father's party, but she'd never miss Soul's. Except she did! That little exchange between her and Spirit, when she realizes what she's done, is heartbreaking.

Soul and Maka's reunion at the end is perfection. I can't wait to gobble up the last chapter of this.

Welp, my heart hurts. They've both pulled back to keep the other one safe, but gosh does it suck to see the distance between them. :(

I really feel for Maka here. She's so talented and smart, but can't find anything to do with her skill set. I know she wants to help Soul with massages, but I feel like she could manage a job doing that too with all her strength, lol.

Great stuff here.

I'm really enjoying this. It's a sad thing to see the distance between them, but it's a very believable scenario. Curious to see how this develops.

Thanks so much for the read!

This needs way more reviews, I love that they struggled with being normal. It's realistic. I wish there was a liiiittle more chapters but this is great as it is

this was terribly invasive. you took the relationship I always yearned for and showed the scary negative side of loneliness developing in the distance between them where there hadn't been an inch of space before. then you leave with only a hint of resolution. we are left to logically think that they will be ok because they know what the problem is and are working to fix it but don't give us the satisfaction of seeing them mend their relationship back to the connection they once held. it leaves me vulnerable and raw but it is very real. overall this was excellent. your blend of poetic description and sarcastic meme humor is wonderful. everything you write makes me fall harder for you. I'm so happy your posting again, we really missed you.

Aww man. Jesus. I cried so hard in chapter 6 when Maka realizes what was going on. I feel hurt. I feel deceived. I feel lied to. I'm entirely emotionally compromised now. My heart, it is wounded; maybe it'll recover one day. The ending was cute as heck but dude you dealt me and my weak ass a hard painful blow with this one.