Really good work. Thank you so much for sharing your efforts. It was a great read.

Solid piece of fanfic, thank you.
Although I do feel as if it's too long for what's happening. But I like how it's concentrated on their relationships and Voldi is not even covered once. Utilising a network of horcruxes is a nice idea, I only seen a similar idea once, where they used a network of dark marks to fry everyone else with a mark (Pet project, I believe it was called?).

I love the fact that the thing that Harry is most worried about is Hermione finding about him taking Winky as his elf.

Such a good story and a really sweet ending. I look forward to reading the extra bits. Well done and thanks for sharing!

Oh, she's tear-worthy all right, he just doesn't know it yet, haha. Loving this story!

Absolutely loved your story. It's just so brilliant. There was no fighting, hell no Voldemort whatsoever. It was all about Harry and Daphne and it's truly fantastic.

Thank you for your amazing work.

Loving the story! Last chapter Daphne was amazing both in how she dealt with Cormac (being straightforward) and in how she dealt with Dumbledore (being cunning and prepared)

what a ending really sweet story has some really good heart to it

Kudos. It's not often that a fanfic contains original plotlines AND remains believably true to the original characters personalities. I'm impressed with how well you did that. That you did so while staying within the general confines of cannon without a constant rehashing of the things we read elsewhere ... well, that's just awesome. I just want to say thank you for writing it, and sharing your story here for my enjoyment. Well done.

this was a really good story

Interesting use of a patronus, and it kind of fits in with one fanfic that I read where Harry caused a weird spell that caused Moldy to hit himself with the AK that caused the magic behind the intent that was like him regretting his horcruxes, and destroying them all, plus himself.

Really a brilliant story! There are ideas how the typical problems in the HP plot had could have been solved much better. Really awesome. Thanks for posting this great fanfic!

Great story!

This was a beautiful story. I rarely see entire pieces written from Daphne's point of view and that was a rather refreshing change. One of the things I enjoyed about this was how the relationship between Harry and Daphne progressed from essentially a business partnership to a romantic relationship and how they spent most the story pretending they were dating. The way the horcruxes and Voldemort were taken care of was also rather unique, as was the theory on how Harry's parents protected him. All in all, it was a wonderful story and I truly enjoyed it.

Wonderful story. Thank you for writing.
-C