Such a great chapter

God, Dumbles is such a bastard. You don’t have to change Canon

Jenny got what she deserved

Sell done with the background

Great dialogue

Great opening

Entretenida de inicio a fin. Si eres un nuevo lector no dudes más y comienza a leer!

great story! Thanks for sharing it.

I just did another re-read and realized I never commented.

You are a fantastic author and this might be my favorite fic out of any in the fandom I have read. Great concept and even better execution. I will admit I am partial to the pairing but I love how sweet and wholesome it was, the way you wrote their relationship developing as how well the story flows from start to finish. You didn't waste any words.

All your other fics are great as well. And if you ever decide to write your own book I would certainly buy one!

I’m happy I decided to read this again.
Such a great story.

Many of these chapters have had a great last line but I think this was the best so far.

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story!

Just reread this for the third or fourth time and its just as brilliant as the first! Thank you for sharing your work, your writing is incredible !

Okay, I get bring invisible under Harry's cloak and when he silences his feet to remain undetected. The thing is that returning from the Chamber through sewer pipes they would have a distinct odor about them. Something that all writers seem to forget about.

Loved it