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I really liked this. Hope you continue it one day!

Good story, keep up the food work!

update?

Now this a really good story with good plot. I always though that Panacea’s situation was something that couldn’t be handled easily. No, something as deep as that needs a therapist at the least. Hope to see more someday, cheers.

this fic is fucking AMAZING, I would love to read more

Reread it again! Excited for another chapter at some point. No pressure

fcking tattletale, never liked her fanon's versions where she is portrayed as the best so this made me like this story more than before lol

People would’ve cared if Sophia and Taylor’s races were flipped

F**K OFF WITH THAT SHIT! THAT'S TWICE AMY COMPLETELY VIOLATED TAYLOR'S PERSONAL RIGHTS TO PRIVACY AND DIDN'T F**KING APOLOGIZE OR SAY SHE WOULD NEVER DO IT AGAIN! F**KING F**K! YOU DIDN'T EVEN HAVE TAYLOR DO ANYTHING TO HER IN RETALIATION! FORGET OUT OF CHARACTER ACTIONS! YOU'RE SO FAR OUT THAT YOU'RE IN F**KING ORBIT!

Thanks for convincing me to drop this. I already hated how you didn't do a f**king thing against the three bitches and now you've ruined Amy Dallon's character. What a waste of time.

So, Taylor is in trouble, because Coil broke the unwritten rules!
Please update soon!

I liked the story, sad it ended, could have done without the large focus on Amy at the end though.

God, I hate Amy. I love the story, but Amy is just the worst. I will never understand the people that simp for her. She is toxic and creepy, she is an incestuous rapist that gets off on body horror, that not only lied to everyone that she couldn't do anything about brains resulting in countless people either dying due to head injuries or leaving them suffering from mental illnesses or left in comas and refused to heal her own sister after turning her into a monster. "But her adopted mother treated her like a ticking time bomb!" She was a ticking timebomb, Carol's gut was right. "But if Tattletail didn't say anything she would have never snapped!" Literally, all Tattletail did was say she knew her secret and not attack her, she didn't do anything to make her a rapist. Before she said anything Amy already wanted to mind rape her sister into being her sex toy and test dummy for her power. That was her secret, her secret wasn't 'oopsie I have a crush on my adopted sister' or 'whoops I've got a sister kink', her secret was that she was OBSESSED with her sister and wanted to make her her sex slave.

The Woobie Pan-Pan simps that insist she's an innocent law abiding heroic good girl drive me insane. She's a dependent stalker obsessed with her sister, with a toxic personality, that lied about her powers, that mind raped her own sister, that raped her own sister, that turned her own sister into a body horror nightmare. Amy is pure evil, and anyone who defends her makes her sound like she is the victim, and they nearly always hate on Vicky, you know, the actual victim. Vicky has her problems, punch first ask questions later, excessive force, hypocrisy, etc. But she didn't deserve anything that was done to her, nobody deserves what Amy did to her. Simping for Amy is disgusting.

no wonder this died

SYMPA