Reviews for The Disappearance of Harry Potter
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
Interesting start. Going to have to guess that the GoF is a world item. It would need to be, since it penetrated Nazaricks defenses. Also because Momonga will inevitably try to use the ring "Wish Upon a Star" to break the binding upon the contract.
Kilare T'suna chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
Could mare destroy Voldemort easily?
Thristan chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
Yeah, someone's gonna die.
Waiting for Pappa Momanga to show up
Val'Hor chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
This looks nice ! Keep up the good work ! :D
coduss chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
at least harry finally gets to reunite with his par- *suddenly remembers that mare and everyone else in nazarik HATES humans* ...oh this is bad...this is very bad...
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
I love it! I can hardly wait to see what happens.
RyuujiVantek chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
Hope you will also bring nazarick in the story... cuz daddy ainz will be angry and worse aura...
yutch.mathes chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
Mare is a boy its the twin who's the girl.
3697014 chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
Just asking will the rest of Nazarick come for Mare?
davycrockett100 chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
sweet
Another Guest1029 chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
Well, this a refreshing change of pace from the usual Wrong-Child-Who-Lived/Abused/Neglected/Dark/MoD/Angst/Revenge/Dark-Lord-Dumbles/Dumb-Adults/Dark-Lord-Harry/Bashing stuff.

I'm quite interested to see what kinds of effects the programing and years of silence (and body swapping thing) has on young Harry. I'm also curious to see if his new body will strictly follow game mechanics or let him learn the spells in his home universe.

And most of all! I want to see everyone's reaction to learning that the prophecy child is a trap! That'll be funny.

Can't wait for your next chapter.
RyuujiVantek chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
Why do you have to make it so tear jerking? Damn...
Looking forward for more.
Kilare T'suna chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
Mare, huh? I thought you were doing demiurge. No matter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Now I'm waiting to see of there will be more stories where Harry will be a guardian of Nazerick
ShadowWolf223 chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
This is going to be interesting.
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