Another great chapter i think your the first arthritis story when the characters not related to Percy or anything like that so this would be a cool change of pace keep up the good work mate.

Holy shit. I expected that, SILVER necklace and how you described his light being closer to moon light than sun light, but that last line about Paul killed me!

This is the best OC Character/Video Game Arc fiction I've ever read, I hope it continues to impress me, you right just like Rick if he wrote for mature audiences. Keep up the great work!

HAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH So predictable that it would be Artemis xD like srsly this story is good like rlly good. Cant wait to see if Artemis will love him(probably) and the reaction of the Hunt(this is the part i cant wait to see but take your time and dont rush it i just love this story)

And I just started reading the ToA. It's a long ways off, but it gets me excited. Can't wait to see Alexander kick ass - by hiding and sniping lol. Love the pantheon crossover! Great chapter :)

YOU THOUGHT APOLLO WAS YOUR FATHER, BUT IT WAS I, [insert European sun god]

I like what you have done tho i wish the chapters where a little longer tho, and I wonder if he will use that sword in the future?

Immediately Favorited! An amazing beginning for an amazing story! Will any of the original PJO characters be in this story?

Private school in europe? Sounds like Hogwarts.
Love how he doesn't care about the family. It's realistic because they're strangers.
I also like how he denies a quest and how there's actual consequences, other gamer fics are "Accept or die" and makes me want the character to deny it out of spite.
Hopefully he fucks with canon, explores more of the world and his powers and this isn't some copy paste of the book but with his name added to it.
It kind of seems like he's Artemis' kid. The stealth part, his mortal parent is his father and it didn't unlock the "Child of ?". Even if it gave him a point for an excellent deduction, it doesn't actually confirm it but says "That's a logical deduction to make with the knowledge you have, it might be wrong but have a point anyway".
Though the blue eyes shift it back to Apollo being likely.

This seem like it's going to be good but hopefully you make your chapters longer because if your doing a gamer fic a lot of info and stuff goes into it.

Really interesting!