Reviews for Archer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please bring the story back. I just read when it was last updated. And I would hate to lose such a good story wen the author , still active and this is his second best story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yoooo wtf bro , ruined a good idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() Got people saying hello to the fckin voice in her head? I see why this was dropped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's still as good as I remember. Is there any chance you'll return to this one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The M/S screening ENE put Taylor through was completely pointless. M/S screening operates by comparing how someone is now to a baseline normal - but they didn’t have a baseline recorded for Taylor. The only two people who could have even attempted to give the PRT any baseline data were Danny - who had been in a mental fog for two years - or Sophia who saw Taylor as a sub-human idiot. Without a baseline, and refusing to listen to anything Taylor said, itwas one hundred percent impossible for the M/S screening to clear her! Given how Taylor views the PRT in particular and the government in general, Taylor is VERY likely to view any attempt to make her a ward of the state and start giving her orders to be so close to human trafficking, that it would make no difference. She’d fight to the death to prevent it - hers if necessary, the enslavers by preference. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How do you keep a parahuman sous chef in suspense? I’ll tell you when the episode airs! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh mate, you really made this sound as if you're trying to tell your readers that the wards are the best option. Which is a mistake why exactly? Well I'm so glad you asked sonny: A ton of people heavily dislike the protectorate (and the way of the wards) and wrote stories that make it their sole mission to explain why it is totally unnecessary, hell dangerous even to join them. If it's actually Taylors Psychiatrists opinion (which would be kinda strange because she crossed some borders right there, barely, but she did), that the Wards are a godsend help (how? They can offer her nothing but people she will never trust, training she will never need and leaders she will never want to listen to), make it sound that way. I see no reason for her to join at all, which makes all of this feel incredibly awkward, because Taylor seems to only listen to her Doctor because you want her to, not because she is right. Well, that's my perspective on it, let's hear yours xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have an interest. Ing story here and I hope you decide to continue it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far please do continue it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Author, continue the story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The set up was well done for this. The ticking time bomb exploded and i guess at this point Taylor has gone through too much for this for yet another identity crisis to irreparable harm to her bond with Archer. i cant help but be pessimistic about the drama it should bring both within and outside, i imagine she’ll soon find she’s biased towards blond female knights and twin tails. Nice to see the answer to this, it was at the back of my mind since like the ch2. At least she didn’t say to her “I’m sorry but i like [insert F/SN love interestbecause I was wholly expecting like that when the merge will finalize. Its too late for the “Sorry i like Archer”potential fiasco which died in early chapters. The book idea is crazy in both the funny and dreadful way, not like the internet is any better. I pity her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You wrote sensai here |
![]() ![]() ![]() I assume you meant to write viscous instead of vicious light gold fluid |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder did lisa survive? And who is imp? |