Reviews for Music Beneath the Mountains |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a brilliant fanfic. From the summary, I expected regular wizard oriented story with Harry fighting inside it with an axe instead of a wand. But then this Harry just side stepped the whole "usual route". It had few problems from overly-powerful!Harry trope but it doesn't detract from the story much. I really liked the poetic elements and new lore about goblin culture. Amazing how it goes through the whole 7 years within a single story and doesn't feel like it's too stretched or too rushed. It was a nice touch not to break the story into Hogwarts years, when there is a "second half of year X and first half of year X1" break instead, that makes the chapters revolt around the summer in-between of Hogwarts years because he spends this time in goblin realm and that's the centerpiece to him. Anyways, great story, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is already going to have a full future with just the Argent Ocean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is likely building up quite the reputation with the Goblins; rescuing a friends father, battling and force Voldemort to flee with a grievous injury, taking on werewolves. The only thing I cannot recall is if he killed Greyback? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if the carcass is worth anything to the Goblins? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kudos! Lots of kudos! I love this story. I understand why the end became less funny and more dark. I also understand why the "Final Battle" was so unticlimatic. Also it fit the story well. And I am happy for the hint that Harry and Luna may end up together. I mean the goblins do something about the enemies through the Argent Ocean. It would be fitting if they could also evolve their relationship with the Deep Ones by Luna's lead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very entertaining. Such a different perspective and I loved Harry’s lack of understanding on how wizards think or don’t think. Quite a few humorous moments. It would be nice to have an epilogue on what happens with the Fudge, Sirius and others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, with a strong Hero, willing to make alowances for others not understanding him. Fun Read Thank you for spending the time wrinting -C |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fantastic! You fill in a whole culture in this story. Well, more then one, full glimpses of others. I stayed up reading this. I loved Harry's portrayal in this. His friends, and his confusion that turned to understanding. All of it played out so well. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() for this ! and for finishing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I really wanted they end up together she can talk to animals and he to objects. Also he will need to work in the human world part time, maybe in in class of goblin dueling? Or as liaison? The goblins need someone who can work with both human and goblins, and other races and both Harry and Luna would be perfect for that job. And he could continue to be smith in his other time. I think the cloak will want to go with some kids of his or grandkid. That why it stay. Also it had stayed with his family from the beginning and can tell him stories of his father. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to say this is probably one of my favorites stories on this site. Harry describing the Realm of Song to Dumbledore give me chills every time I re-read this gem. I have an idea for a prompt, if I may. Harry is found by (or find) a familiar of your choice whom he magically bond with. His loyalty-to-the-death to them cause the Hat to put him in Hufflepuff, where he thrive until the tournament. Harry/Neville pairing, cause I've yet to find one of those and I think they compliment each-other. They're really close to Ginny and Luna, who are an item too, cause those two are such cutie pies, especially together, and I love seeing more of them in stories. I hope you're doing well, and I'm waiting with delight for your next chapters on your currents stories ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was in tears from "you never insult a stone's flakes of mica, it just isn't done." Haven't laughed that hard in too long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() Great story |