Reviews for Lady Lucks Favor
pzombie chapter 18 . 11/21
Still here waiting
Chronosign chapter 9 . 11/20
Meant to do this in the first chapter.
Genie: I'm free, I'm free. Quick wish her something outrageous say I want the Nile. Wish for the Nile, try that.
Aladdin: I wish for the Nile.
Genie: NO WAY! Ah does that feel good! Oh I'm free, I'm free at last, I'm hitting the road, I'm off to see the world, I'm-...
Aladdin: Genie, I'm going to miss you.
Genie: Me too Al. No matter what anybody says you'll always be a prince to me.
RIP Robin Williams
Chronosign chapter 8 . 11/17
Thought Dora or Danny were gonna possess Sam so things would get kinkier, the double dick part was a bit weird for me. Surprised Danny hasn't inflated a girl's belly with his cum.
Chronosign chapter 2 . 11/16
Just thought of something. Danny trying to possess Ember and they switch bodies before having sex.
black king chapter 1 . 11/5
see see
Thane chapter 18 . 10/16
I hope this isn’t dropped
Ohma chapter 1 . 9/7

their instead of there
your instead of you're

Ohma chapter 1 . 9/7
fuck off catspats31

you should make a back-up tho author.
catspats31 chapter 18 . 9/3
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Go remove every single detailed description of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own.
racciattijoaquin chapter 17 . 8/15
Guest chapter 18 . 8/12
Please update your story
racciattijoaquin chapter 18 . 8/8
StoryR1der chapter 18 . 8/4
Well it’s about time Danny said it. That moment between him and Desiree was sweet.

I did notice grammar issues in the chapter but other than that nice work.

Is Jack gonna be OOC in this? Cause if memory serves he does love Maddie he just gets way into his work.

I’m sure Star’s gonna come running the second she hears Danny’s back.

And How’s Vlad gonna react when he catches wind that Danny’s trained with Pandora? Will he try to find some way to level the playing field?

Have you considered any flashback chapters? Like how I everyone in Amitypark carried on while Danny was away or flashbacks to some of Danny’s more “special” lessons with Pandora?
Lol chapter 18 . 8/3
Your seriously trying to promote a patreon? Maybe fix your god awful grammar before doing that, still laughing about them being in a office relationship and death city being a combination of New York and Vagus.
Rednaut67 chapter 18 . 7/26
Pretty great story so far, hope to see more
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