Reviews for happily ever after
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16
Awesome story, keep up the great work.
princetongirl chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
sunni07 chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
Well, it was a good start, but it lacked a lot of detail and believability. Also, it's really just an overview of what happened. Maybe you could do it again, where what you have done is the first chapter, and then you go back and fill in the details? That might be cool.

Nice try, though! :)
Weasley is my King chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
Wow. So, let me start this out nicely. Nice try. This story had lots of missing punctuation, which made it difficult to read. Secondly, there were a few spelling mistakes, but people who read fanfiction can't expect to not see some. Thirdly, the story is highly unlikely and just not very fun to read. It's practically a paragraph! Maybe next time you should add some detail, or paragraphs or maybe a plot. Those are just some suggestions! Really though, nice try.
Julie40 chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
thats a very cool ending and I thought if they were going to do a second ending it would be just like you put it.
melissa-lee1 chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Your fanfic lacked detail. It seems fairly unlikley no offence.

Good try though.