Why in the world did he agree with all these conditions for a dance class... Just sell your soul for a dance lesson bro

The way Harry talks about girls is just nasty. So gross and unnecessary.. this could’ve have been a good story but the author justifies his pervertedness yuck

Did Harry just murder Rita Skeeter in cold blood and hid evidence right in front of her colleague? Ballsy.

I absolutely love your version of Marchbanks.

Damit i wish harry had a dramatic exit like that. He shouldve been that “yes but headmaster… you forget i am not Tom… i do not fear death.” And then, like, melt into shadows or something or just straight up disapear, without any flashy thing happening, just being there one moment, and then not being there the next.

Harrys letting his emotions control him. He isnt being the leader hes meant to be. Instead of recklessly going to the Malfoy Manor, he shouldve assembled the advisors and demanded they actually get off there lazy assed and hey this plan started. Or risk losing there chance as they stalled.

Harry is the leader. Theyre his advisors. His council. But the final choice is with him, Harry needs to make that more clear to them or else theyll never accept harry as there true leader.

They totally got revenge on Ivan for killing Cyrus. Canceling business ventures between them is totally equal to the murder of Daphne's dad... I really hope that's not the end of it.

We made it almost to the end of the entire story and now you have the MC taking part in a plan that will kill innocent people. Classy.

Yay, he has the locket. I wonder if it has any cool enchantments.

I was originally annoyed that there was now a third girl in contention. Then she told the MC he's probably going to have more than one wife. I have accepted that I've been tricked into a harem fic. I have reached enlightenment and am at peace with the universe.

You can't skip the talk with the Arcturus portrait you monster!

Is this going to be a relationship with both girls? As long as it's not more than two girls with the MC it's alright but beyond that, it starts to become ridiculous.

I like this explanation for Veritaserum. Hopefully, the MC will have good questions to ask Natalia that she can't talk her way out of.

He's learning a lot from Slughorn. He would be a good political and potions mentor and Harry definitely needs the education.

Really hope we get rid of Natalia soon. So boring to read. I got so excited thinking he was finally breaking it off and then he let it get dragged out again. And considering the secrets he has I can't believe he's willing to take a truth serum of any type.

When it comes to Natalia/Fleur and their families there can't be any investment (from me the reader) when I think everything they say/do is to manipulate the MC. It basically gets skimmed over.

Cuddles pov for the win, lol.

Killing off Skeeter like that was hilarious. Bursting out laughing right now.

If we can't have a nice Dumbledore, I always enjoy getting one over on him. Very satisfying.