Really hope we get rid of Natalia soon. So boring to read. I got so excited thinking he was finally breaking it off and then he let it get dragged out again. And considering the secrets he has I can't believe he's willing to take a truth serum of any type.

When it comes to Natalia/Fleur and their families there can't be any investment (from me the reader) when I think everything they say/do is to manipulate the MC. It basically gets skimmed over.

Cuddles pov for the win, lol.

Killing off Skeeter like that was hilarious. Bursting out laughing right now.

If we can't have a nice Dumbledore, I always enjoy getting one over on him. Very satisfying.

I like the gift for Natalia. I was worried he was going to hand over some family heirloom the second he had access to his vault so this was a nice surprise.

It's a good thing the book was charmed not to be read by others. The boy should know better than to share books from Salazar's library.

With how much he's learning from his new abode it wouldn't make sense to return to Hogwarts classes. It would be a complete waste of time.

I hope he doesn't forgive Ron. Hermione can be forgiven but Ron went way overboard.

I can't help but think Occlumency would be a lovely addition to his repertoire.

Cuddles the dragon. hehehe

Yaaaay rituals

I'm surprised he even went to classes.

it's decent enough and I plan to continue reading it but holy shit does it read like a dissertation, the author would do well to find balance between pacing and flushing out his story, I understand the need to be thorough, but we're not taking an AP class on rituals I am unsure if it is in an effort to increase word count, but it makes for a tedious read

I thouroughly enjoyed the story so far, but this doesn't make sense. They free a bunch of death eaters, they somehow make them work for Ivan, Ivan oversteps with the unplanned attacks, but they talk at the ball like everything goes as planned. They make the eath attack like Voldemort has returned, and Cyrus dies? Is Harry stupid? Does Ivan betrayed them? Why there are death eater attacks? Why they do this at all? Do they believe Voldi directs them? Or did Ivan just let them free? There are too many gaps here. It's not the suspense of missing information where I'm eager to discover what happened and why. It's the lack of every logic and beliavability.

soooo... just a couple of questions id like to follow up onwhat exactly are PANDAs? Dumbledore got three of them? is this to imply that somehow he lived?

i genuinely loved this story, and honestly, Ive fallen in love with the Harry x Fleur pairing because of this.

im sending this from mobile. i hope to hear some answers and also to see more from you, amazing work. truly.

Minor mistake, you mentioned the first 3 prime numbers when Harry was nervous, un dues trois. One is not a prime number, it has one factor which is one. A prime number is defined as only having 2 interger factors and is greater than one; 2, 3 and 5 are the first 3 prime numbers

Imagine if voldemort didnt come back? (u) that would be hilarious!

Thats so sad… poor luna