Reviews for Harry Potter and the International Triwizard Tournament |
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l30rusty chapter 26 . 2/10 ignoring the fact no one was watching over the hostages, or that there were no auros going in when they saw a huge fire or the fact youd be unconscious from the amount of injuries they had let alone magical exhaustion and the fact they didn't have anything for the crowd to view the event as it happening or the fact that they could of been flown out of the forest by cuddles and when they get back all being conscious but ignoring all those glaring issues with chapter 24 and 25 yeh it was great |
l30rusty chapter 25 . 2/10 i was loveing this book then this chapter and 24 are just ruining such a great book im in two minds wether to stop reading it if its going to have more ridiculously dumb stuff like this last two chapters |
l30rusty chapter 25 . 2/10 now they should definitely be f**king unconscious they've used all there magic and are majorly injured so yeh they should be unconscious for days if not into weeks |
l30rusty chapter 24 . 2/10 most of them should be unconscious using all your magic would knock you out for days |
l30rusty chapter 13 . 2/9 i disagree with this chapter quite unrealistic id say in how one of the events turned out |
l30rusty chapter 11 . 2/8 i love the start of this chapter |
Grosvenor chapter 10 . 2/4 Thick woolly socks for Dumbledore! |
Astramilitarum01 chapter 18 . 1/30 The story is well written but it's an absolut chore to get tru it, the amount of political drama is pretty unnecessary to be honest and the relationships are also done rather one-dimensional and strained. I really tried to get to read more chapters but since I'm Bing reading I'm just exhausted from only 18 chapters, especially as it get more and more into the political bs, full of logic errors and unrealistic assumptions. I like the overall direction of the story but its like I'm reading a financial report for hours |
hpmick13 chapter 8 . 1/8 The main thing that comes to mind when I've been reading this is, wow this is tedious. A lot is like slogging through review material, then we have the boredom of multiple dances lessons. There are a lot of occasions where either the wrong word is used or the sentence structure is muddled as well. |
teaman1 chapter 33 . 1/8 I like the way you presented your idea unique dial of bringing the character to lie. You keep me on the edge of my seat reading this new version of the Harry Potter. Thank you! |
teaman1 chapter 25 . 1/5 Love is chapter! |
atymer chapter 55 . 1/2 I enjoyed reading this tale very much. I appreciated the author's exploration of Harry's abrupt journey into carrying the moral consequences of his decisions in order to survive the machinations of old men who refuse to fight a war and clean up after their mistakes. Harry's relationship(s) with friend a foe was more realistic than many fics with multiple pairings. Honestly is everyone going to get along all the time and be perfectly adorable? By the time I got to the final confrontation I wanted to shake Harry by the neck and say, "What are you waiting for? Lava pit already!" |
Ricky chapter 35 . 12/29/2023 Honestly the multi paring is so poorly done, you make the excuse of Harry neeeding multiple children to have multiple wives. Natalie is by far the least interesting romantic interest in this story and also being an OC character I find her unnecessary to the overall plot. You could have settled with a fleur and Daphne and have them bond through their realtionship with Harry instead of dragging this on. Harry should marry who he wants regardless of the circumstances, fuck politics marry for love. |
IdolaCandrie chapter 11 . 12/30/2023 Was it Pettigrew? Please, tell me it was Pettigrew! |
jurmaev chapter 55 . 12/29/2023 I enjoyed reading this story, a lot of unique ideas were explored, great work |