Reviews for Harry Potter and the International Triwizard Tournament
dragonheart117 chapter 1 . 12/18/2023
got to chap 14. was good up till after the ball. that was a good ending point. Everything after that was forced. Harry suddenly had to shift personalities from sentence to sentence to justify what the plot wanted.
it is also a story where I hate all the girls involved with him, which is quite impressive. Harem is usually a group of cutout female characters, I don't necessarily love those characters, but I don't really mind them, this story has me hating all the female love interests... The author went for political intrigue and it got mashed into the romance, which ends in a who killed the butler mystery, but instead of murder you question weather the girls actually even like harry at all or are just manipulating him, with tons of red herrings and reasons to think the answer is no regardless of proof.
It gets so bad harry apparently uses veratasium on one of the girls to see if she actually likes him, or is using him. only for the author to go nope, can be fooled.
Marrrrre chapter 57 . 12/12/2023
Nice read!
thunderofdeath97 chapter 56 . 12/11/2023
Honestly the whole multi marriage thing is pointless. The whole point of a multi pairing, is for everyone to be involved with each other. Yet that's not the case here.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 55 . 12/11/2023
What was the point of all the rituals, if he was going to continue to be weak and constantly get his ass handed to him? Lol
thunderofdeath97 chapter 54 . 12/11/2023
Harry already knew that Cyrus is the one who moved Hermione.

Also, Harry didn't overreact to slights, if anything, I think he underreacted. Personally I think he should be more angry at Daphne. He's a pushover this whole fic.
teaman1 chapter 10 . 12/11/2023
I am on the edge of my seat taking in every word and praising the way you presented the characters. I still don’t understand why Harry, now that he an adult can’t get his apparate license?
thunderofdeath97 chapter 53 . 12/11/2023
I mean by all rights James should resent his parents and Lily. He would be perfectly alright to do so.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 51 . 12/10/2023
Hm. Maybe Amelia's a cougar?

Also why is Daphne suddenly blonde now? She was a brunette in earlier chapters.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 47 . 12/10/2023
Yeah creating a horcrux is just, yeah. No words to describe it.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 46 . 12/10/2023
You do realize, that you just proved WHY Harry and Daphne don't and shouldn't work together as a pairing,right?

Also, if married couples don't sleep together, then why even be married and live together? Seems pointless in a way.
teaman1 chapter 5 . 12/10/2023
The new outlook on this story is a refreshing view, and an reality how people act and cause and effect of their action. I wish to see Rich due to all the misfortune that comes his way all because of what happened when he was a baby.. the fact that people take perception make it reality, and then expect everybody to see their viewpoint. This is something that I have been dwelling on since I started reading all the story, Harry life! I see now, a young boy, tired of being bullied, tired of people telling him what he hast to do. finally he comes to a breaking point, and this is reality he is fighting for his life. He is fighting for respect and more importantly I see in this story that he is going to grow and learn how to deal with deceit and manipulation from all the people around him. This will cause him to try to find someone that he can trust to, and believe in not only himself but others.. thank you for bringing a new view of the story! I look forward to the end. Keep up the good work. The one question I have is, I don’t understand the purpose of the dragon was it just for him to kill the dragon or what was the actual outcome of the ritual?.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 45 . 12/9/2023
You just keep proving why NEITHER Daphne nor Natalia deserve to be with him.

Yeah, he's weak as fuck.

Idk why the hell he seems to care about, or would be happy/proud of Lily. She really isn't someone to aspire to emulate.

just because Lily never showed it, nor did any ofthe past Potters show it or have it, doesn't mean Harry couldn't have gotten it from one of them, or some unknown ancestor.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 44 . 12/8/2023
More and more it seems Cyrus is the reason behind Hermione moving to America. Daphne's actions are kind of pointing towards it.

So yeah, if all of them are going to be with him and none of the other women, why a multi/harem pairing? I mean I was always under the impression that ALL members of said multi/harem were supposed to be involved with one another?
thunderofdeath97 chapter 41 . 12/8/2023
Yeah, ngl, but I feel like it's kind of hypocritical and sexist to claim it's Harry's fault that Fleur can't and won't try to understand why he's in the situation that he is.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 40 . 12/8/2023
Albus knowing all of that is ridiculous. There is no way or reason he would know all of that specifically.

Natalia is proving more and more why SHE won't/can't work as a love partner. She'd have no time for Harry or a potential family with him. She would expect him to spend a few hours with her one night a week? How is that right or fair to him?

Albus lacks the balls to do anything to Harry.
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