Great story from start to and thru this chapter.
This story had a lot of action, suspense and humorous moments.
Story needs several updates to bring up to date.

Big man tommy throwing a temper tantrum in the comments. Go back to suckling on your sisters teats or something you loser fuck.

Alright story, Fugaku’s rant was kinda wack but I see you leaving hints regarding the relationship of Team 7 w/Minato and Mikoto.

Obviously some grammar and spelling errors. You seem to have a bad habit of mixing up she/her with him/he, specifically in the older chapters which is to be expected I guess. Not sure when you’ll be updating this, but until then I’d say it’s alright.

Nice chapter, i hope You continue this story someday

When are you going to make a new chapter up date already ass hole you are a jerk an ass and piece of shit

Give up this story sucks.

Great story with plenty of action and suspense.
Stroy could use some romance/sex scenes.
I just wonder if Naruto is going to get both sisters.
Story needs several updates.

Alright (all right), that wasn't (was not) so bad. You have an interesting story here and I honestly can't (can not) wait to read the rest of the story.

that is good. update soon please.

when next chapter comes

Yo update this?

This really made no sense.

Alright, this was a pretty dumb chapter. I think I get what you were going for by having Fugaku lash out at Mikoto, but it didn't pan out the way you wanted. Fugaku has had no impact nor solid characterization in the story for the most part, and to see him come out the door swinging like this after he'd been portrayed as stoic and uncaring is unnatural. There were better ways to handle that sort of scene, with proper buildup, than what you wrote.

The latter half of the chapter was equally as poor. You've made more than a few alterations to the canon background of everyone, and yet it has ultimately changed nothing. Absolutely nothing—what was even the point?

And then you tack on a quip about old age right before the final line in the chapter concerning a massacre. Not only did it not fit the tone of the passage, but it actively detracts from it and removes any immersion the reader might have gained by that point.

There are more than a few typos and grammatical errors in both this chapter and the previous ones. It makes the story hard to read at times; I would recommend you proofread your work or otherwise have a beta do it for you.

The story can also be more than just a tad melodramatic at time, and certain sequences don't quite make sense—progression the narrative for the sake of the narrative, rather than having any real purpose in an of themselves.

That said, your story does have its charms, and ultimately I enjoy it enough to keep reading it.

Why bother using the japanese names if you're just going to put the english translations in parenthesis. It's a waste of time, just write it in english at that point.

please update this story