Chp21

Wow! Your grammar has greatly improved!

Anyways, I have a question...can sasuki(Satsuki) and Naruto be married? I know that being a partner is much more greater but still.

Chp20

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Chp19

Damn...this could have been avoided! Hah, why did you have to do that to satsuki(sasuki)? You could have avoided it, I just hope that filthy mark will be gone soon.

The sooner the better.

Chp18

Hmmm

Chp17

I really hope that satsuki(sasuki) wouldn't get attacked by that orochi-peadophile! Please don't do that.

Hmm, I really hope that you also improve your grammar...I can also help you with it if you want.

Anyways, great story! Looking forward to seeing more!

Chp16

Well...that was interesting.

It is quite amusing to see that the jounin of konoha turned into a gossip group for a little while, tho I do hope that Naruto and satuski get together soon.

I can't help but be excited already.

Hmmm, interesting.

I just hope that Satsuki and Naruto get together soon.

Chp14

Ah, I really like how they have gotten closer!

Chp13

Damn, they didn't confess their feelings.

Chp12

That was a touching scenes, your not that bad at doing romance to be hones, but you could still improve and be better than this I just know it.

Also, really hope that Naruto and satuski would be together soon! Anyways great chap! Looking forward to more chap!

Chp11

So mikoto and minato used to be together, but because of the arranged marriage between mikoto and fugaku they had to break up...

Really hope that you don't do anything that would hurt satsuki, I also hope that Naruto and satuski would get together soon.

Chp10 interesting.

Chp9

I really hope that satsuki and Naruto get together soon.

Hmm

Chp7

Er...I really can't wait for Naruto to drop the act.