Great story, I kept anticipating that Harry was going to get caught or some twist where justice triumphs.

Personally, I'd rather see Neville with Luna. She is so gentle and sweet, and I think she would be great for Neville. Daphne and Tracy are usually pretty good; it depends how they are written. I think both of them can be good for Harry and Neville. Luna is still my favorite girl for Neville. Hermione is far too bossy most of the time; it depends how she is written.

Ginny is too Harry-focused. I can't see too many guys wanting to risk being with her. I think she would be critical and argumentative because she would never be satisfied. I also see her as extremely high-maintenance. I picture her as wanting to live the Lifestyles of the Rich & Famous of the Wizarding World and settling for nothing less. JMHO.

I know Hannah is canon, but I don't really like her. We don't get much on her from the books, and I rarely like the way she is written in fanfiction. I guess I'll have to wait and maybe someday I'll find a version I like.

"He's body was destroyed when the killing curse hit him ..." should be "His body was destroyed ..." "He's" is a contraction which can be used for "he is" or "he has."

I really have mixed feelings about this. On one hand I love the ideas - that Harry finds a new friend and study material in Neville, that he confides in Amelia Bones and Tonks about his school experiences and horrible childhood, that they are of business namely trapping Voldemort. That the Unspeakables can remove Harry's scar and Voldemort's soul fragment. That he has a happier life.

On the other hand, he casually and deliberately inflicts a lot of pain on students wearing the Potter Stinks badges and those trting to help them. Yes, they are bullying him but they are not all hexing him in Hogwarts corridors. It's interesting that Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson and Zacharias Smith die. I am sure there are worse bullies in the school who don't. This reminds me of school shooting incidents except that here the culprit gets away. I understand wanting to kill those who have bullied you, but actually killing them is a different matter. If Harry had injured or hurt an adult Death Eater like Lucius Malfoy (as he does in some stories) I wouldn't have been conflicted at all.

yeah sorry but harry would not hurt that many people just to hurt malfoy

yes she only has her neice who harry almost murdered with the fire stunt

lol harry says he won't live where they allow a murder like malfoy free thats a good one since harry just murdered 3 people and injured over 100 more with the magical fire thing he did

A wonderful story here.

'He does want me dead.'

'Yes, but not for malicious reasons Harry,'

sounds pretty malicious to me.

Um, idea is amazing, but there are some canon discrepancies..like how harry was threatened by Snape after his name came out of the goblet, and he saw the memory of the trials before the third task. I get this is fanfiction but still..

Harry belongs in jail for life. He just murdered several people and burned hundreds, intentionally. His reasons don’t matter - nothing that was done to him justifies what he did for revenge.

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! That was fucking awesome!

A wonderful take on the tale of Harry. I enjoyed it very much!
I do wish, though, that Dobby had put out a newspaper that they saw as they passed to go out to the beach that mentioned about some odd accident with the lifts at the Ministry that happened to someone named Umbridge...heh heh heh...

Loved it thank you for this story

noice