Thanks

Of course did Dumbledore know. At least something even if not the whole story.

A hippogriff hurts a pureblood student so badly that it takes all of thirteen seconds to heal him. The hippogriff is condemned to death for the evil deed. That the execution takes place only months later is just additional cruelty to make it emotionally harder for the keeper of the beast when it's finally killed.

A house elf kills a pureblood. It's old and didn't understand anymore what it did, and it wasn't on purpose, but the pureblood is dead by the hands of the elf. How long do they let the elf live? Days? Weeks? Certainly not months. Nothing is gained by keeping it alive, it's just an old elf after all.

Riddle worked for Borgin and Burkes during the late forties/early fifties. That's when he visited Smith, murdered her, and vanished afterwards. Days, or weeks at most, later the elf is executed.

Dumbledore got the elf's memory in 1996. Or did he? From an elf who's been dead for decades? I can't know how much Dumbledore knew during the early fifties. But he sat on that knowledge and did exactly nothing with it for about 40 years.

I honestly can't see any of the visiting schools wearing the badges, especially Fleur as why would a champion wear a badge supporting another champion. Also don't think Alicia would seeing as she knows Harry after being on the same team as him for 4 years.

Also doubt magical fire would do much damage to Fleur as she is part veela and veela are creatures of fire.

i'm surprised harry got away with the fire spell without great suspicion that he was behind it, even if there was no proof, as he was the only one who was against the badges and who benefited from people not wearing them - but then that would have been a different story! Thanks for sharing.

wow harry! Cold-hearted thorough revenge. I don't think i can blame you.

excellent story I really enjoyed it thanks for writing it

A good story.

What the hell happened to tonks? She's one of my favourite characters, you could have put some remadora in as well!

Harry’s grandmother was a Black. The black family Does have metaphormagus. So the statement that Harry had nothing in his family history is a lie. Tonks is a cousin so it’s proof that it’s in the same bloodlines idiot.

Damn you smar

The fire was way out of line for Harry

But, fucked up is so true. Has Sirius considered what Bumbles did to him?

it's poorly written, you don't explain things as well as you should and allot of things come out of left field. I feel like there should have been a build up to the Dumbledore situation, and the thing with Hermione was just dumped there randomly. sometimes it's confusing who is talking and there's an overall lack of meat to the story. it feels like you just slapped a bunch of stuff together that should have been built up to. This is ok for the bare bones of a story but it really is lacking substance. also the pairing is weak at best, I think Susan and Harry are a fine pairing, as long as their is buildup. they just randomly decided to date not really knowing anything about each other other than the fact that they have a bit in common, and that's no real reason to build a strong deep love off of, not to mention that it makes no sense for Susan to "be his life now" when they've only been dating for a few weeks and it seems all they've done is snog. it only mentioned them talking about their futures in the end but knowing someone for a few weeks won't tell you if their all that you want in a spouse. all in all your plotline, pairing and story Arc is completely weak, enjoyment of this story is purely based off imagining things that happened off screen.

Very interesting story. A good read.

next time you write something like this, please PLEASE declare it as SNAPE BASHING.

Also you try being an only child with an abusive father and neglectful mother and see how sane you are. I was abused as a child too, but only by my father. When my mother saw what my father was doing she took me and we left. I am an only child... maybe that's why Snape is my favourite character, maybe that's why I despise Dumbledore... I don't know... I'm certifiable.