Reviews for Paternal Instincts
RonaldM40196867 chapter 6 . 4/16
Oh boy.
RonaldM40196867 chapter 5 . 4/16
Time to battle.
RonaldM40196867 chapter 4 . 4/16
Poor Flint.
RonaldM40196867 chapter 3 . 4/16
Good pay.
RonaldM40196867 chapter 2 . 4/16
Nice robbers.
RonaldM40196867 chapter 1 . 4/16
Wowza.
HarukaChihiro chapter 5 . 3/19/2020
This is a good job, hope you continue with this, I like the plot.
Keep going! :-)
Guest chapter 5 . 2/26/2020
Why don't you update your work? You are so unreliable!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/26/2020
You've made tons of mistakes in these five chapters. You suck.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/7/2019
Good job.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/7/2019
More?
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 5 . 11/26/2019
There are only a handful of typos, and they’re negligible if anything.

This is honestly amazing quality for something typed out on the phone. I’m impressed. Wew.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/2/2019
What boss was Peter talking about? This doesn't make any sense. And watch your capitalization and the rest of your grammar.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/2/2019
You have too many spelling and grammar mistakes. You need to watch out for that and read over your work before you post it. Fix that when you have a chance. I'm glad you updated this story. Hope you continue to updated and you don't abandon it like you've done before.
A chapter 3 . 7/23/2019
Need more! Gimme more!
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