After 2 chapter the fic is moving along nicely.

Please update your story soon!

So blatant rape and or molestation referenced and none of them had an inkling of an urge to do anything about it? To say anything?

Absolutely no need for this purgatory crap. I don't know why its been added and why there's so much stupidly as having to keep it on someone at all times but this is just dumb and needless tragedy.

Having James lose it all, stick around seeing his wife hurt and moving on and now doing something utterly needless and damning himself?

This is fucked up and again needlessly. Screw this chapter and forced tragedy setup.

The Raven finding the room liket that came from nowhere and felt seriously forced. How and why would the Raven act like or notice that room?

Good chapter except for two things. Really one bit I noticed a second. The little thing is Hermione went from reacting to nothing when reading. To stopping everytime someone called her name just once in this chapter.

The main thing is the trolls entrance. He's actively reacting to something he heard and paying attention. Yet somehow a huge Troll with its heavy thudding footsteps and potent stinch snuck up behind him within swinging distance?

Then in a handful of seconds a second Troll sneaks up behind him again coming from a long empty hallway he had just been looking down? Might I add same for the other, that these are long straight hallways?

Expected Millicient to also join. Remember her and Pansy brought up early in the story and apparently Pansy is still friends. Yet no mention of her.

So he offered to teach them because the school put them there. Of course two older kids for prefects too but Astoria who grew up with them got left out as everyone else was taught despite being sisters and surrounded by all the other kids getting taught.

Wondering why Tonks is held back a year since she should've graduated just before they started.

With both Lily and teach at the school the first year can't play out remotely normally. I doubt Voldy could be hidden from them. They scan often and would notice his presence. The third corridor wouldn't be tolerated outside his trained stooges(teachers). Nor would Lily at least let them go to the forbidden forest with just Hagrid, at night, after something vile enough to kill unicorns and drink their blood. Since that's... braindead in itself.

Frankly first year should be solved very early.

I hope this story continue.

Update please

I couldn't even finish the chapter before writing this... I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY SO FAR! Such a great idea!

Wow I hope you are able to get past your writers block in absolutely loving this story, wish to read more, keep it up

I’m confused. Isn’t Ted Tonks SUPPOSED to be a muggle? Like I thought the whole reason andromeda got burned off the black family tree was because she married a muggle….?

A Humble Mansion? Isn't that a contradiction in terms?