Reviews for The New Order Of Merlin: The Gathering (book 1) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, my name is Edwin, and although you probably don't remember me, I started reviewing this story 4 years ago as it was first being posted on . Since that site most unfortunately died, I haven't been able to find your stories again until now. I just wanted to say I'm super excited to read this again after the edit, as well as the second part of the story which I didn't get a chance to read before hpfanfiction went down. PS. I read several places that everything on was being moved to a new platform but I've never been able to find that archive anywhere, which is disappointing because I had a couple stories of my own I lost on hpfanfiction, as well as some of the best stories I've ever read which I haven't been able to find anywhere else. Do you happen to know where that archive is or if it exists? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've enjoyed this story, but your last update was December 2021. Please, come back and help Merlin help Harry, as well as Jack and Elsa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story . I read it all up in one sitting . When r u posting the next chapter ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh snape he probably has the antidote on hand himself as the potions professor, why does he scare the kids like this? And this is so fascinating, seeing jack’s intuitiveness with magic and potions … would he be able to cure the kids with mandrakes earlier? and I can’t help but feel like Merlin is dropping the ball AGAIN … are these kids the children of Morgana? Thanks for updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fun chapter! And oh Merlin xD his beef with dumbledore is hilarious. And I can’t believe he suspects jack now thanks for updating ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, im loving this! merlin can be so oblivious even though he's supposedly the greatest warlock who ever lived xD poor colin. merlin's gonna feel so guilty. can't wait for the next update 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() UGH! PLease continue writing this! And puclish whatever you already have! I Saw his in my email notifications and- stupid schoolwork took up my time- still laughted at how you described Lockhart's homework. Please don't leave this unpublished! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope I didn't sound rude with my last comment, I was just curious. I really love how this story is going and how you are making the characters feel real, not just words on a page. Happy New Year and good luck in future chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story finished? I saw you started the next one but I’m confused about whether this is done or not. Loved it by the way! I love how you mixed and included characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this idea! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MERLIN! He's so gloriously uncaring for formalities! I love it! and when mcgonagall walked in and he said bye albus, and she just looked at him aghast!(at least in my mind I put maggie smith's signature aghast look) If memory serves, this chapter was practically untouched. Loved it then and I love it now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor ginny,sometimes i feel like that too. Like what have i done all day? But i usually just hang around studying or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Minerva is such a detailed and intriguing character in this story. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! I loved the pranks and the food fight! I'm hoping it's the one I remember, but If not, totally awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, Merlin! he's here! I feel like a young girl on christmas day! colin's awesome, he's so sweet and talkative. especially in that scene in the great hall! If he were a real person we would be great friends. I'm one of those people that just doesn't know when to shut up, so there would never be a moment of silence between us. I can't remember if it was this one, or some other merlim/harry crossover fic that I read, but I seriously hope you kept the food fight/prank wars in, 'cause, honestly died oflaughter with those chapters! Can't wait for the next update! |