Reviews for A New Home |
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![]() ![]() This naruto is a fucking beta he's not a man at all wtf |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf he should e fucking dead you retard "jiraiya" are you fucking brain dead |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() She asks him out on a date and he's the one who has to arrange and pay for it? What kinda bullshit is that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should’ve stopped including the naruto world. They are irrelevant to main timeline. Also you are setting up naruto and yasaka so fast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought he would find a way to link both worlds cause he cares but it feels like a family type story once I got to chapter 16 so I lost interest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite the emotional chapter in finding out everything about his parents and who they are. I'm wondering how the others of Konoha will react to Naruto being engaged and having a daughter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boring as fuck... the core of this Story is Romance. The world and characters can be replaced with anything else, doesn't matter if it's Naruto and DxD. Nothing happens beside a Clichee Lovestory between two exchangeable characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() A beautiful slice of life. It was a bit rough at the start but I enjoyed the ride. I’ve been looking for some simple fluff for a while and this really hit the spot. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this, NO HAREM PLEASE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is FANTASTIC I hope that Hinata can join Naruto and Yasaka in their relationship, seeing as all three of them NEED ALL OF THE LOVE THEY CAN GET if she's unable to join them, I hope she gets with someone who will love her feel free to message me if you want to let me know what you think |