Reviews for Once Upon A Midnight Dream
keraatchley05 chapter 3 . 5/17
Uh-oh
keraatchley05 chapter 2 . 5/17
Great
keraatchley05 chapter 1 . 5/17
Loved it! Poor Bella!
catgrl chapter 20 . 5/9
Wow that really good and different. Hmm what happened with Tony and Charlie before the end. Was it really Charlie that ripped Bella and Clint into peace’s?
loveprass chapter 11 . 12/14/2021
... This is whole ass hot mess. Like i couldn't keep up with anything that happened. I'm so confused right now. you go from one place to another completely out of the blue, no warning just, yep this is happening, this is canon in my fic. I've done a shit ton of crack fics in my day, this is more of lsd mixed with meth fic. I've never encountered anything like it ever. i personally dont like it, some other person does I'm sure, but its not for me. One off my biggest issues with this is that the characters seem to switch personalities at the drop of a hat, like Steve having a crush on bella to thinking shes a threat either in the same chapter or the next one, no warning no explanation just Fury told him shes bad and him basically saying ok not looking into it or anything. What did it for me though is the switch like how tf did that make any sense at all, as well as clint taking away tony's memories because he said that didnt sound like jasper and peter. I'm sorry if im coming off as harsh but it makes no sense at all and i have a headache from trying to figure it out.
spamari1181 chapter 1 . 8/4/2021
This story is all over the place and not really explained clearly. It got confusing. AdditionallyI don't feel like Bella is captured here correctly. People also feel out of character. I haven't even finished chapter one because of all of the above.
Navywife07 chapter 19 . 10/25/2019
PleSe update soon can’t wait to read what happens next
arienna89 chapter 19 . 10/15/2019
Loved the update
arienna89 chapter 18 . 9/7/2019
Loved the update glad they've come to their senses
arienna89 chapter 17 . 8/29/2019
Oh the drama, I thought clint was meant to be mature but they're both acting like children... Update again soon
sycoscorpio66691 chapter 15 . 8/13/2019
Can’t wait for this update I’m loving it
twizt312 chapter 12 . 6/22/2019
this is really great i cant wait to read more
01Katie chapter 12 . 6/13/2019
Thanks for the update.
jgood27 chapter 11 . 5/26/2019
Love this story and cant wait to read more
Sassy Mami chapter 10 . 2/8/2019
Confusing. Are they being shown what is happening? Are they remembering or are the out?
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