|Reviews for New Rule|
| TherSia chapter 24 . 3/3
It's somehow good to see this soft side of Snape and Tom but somehow this story is lack of a plot. But I can't say I don't like it.
| P-Webes chapter 24 . 1/5
Awesome story I reall wish u finished it, it had greAt potential
| Icygirl77 chapter 24 . 1/25/2013
| Sakura Snape-Malfoy chapter 24 . 1/22/2013
Why didn't Severus go get his children after the defeat of Voldemort? How was he able to return and with a differnt personality? Would Albus consider hiring Tom as the History of Magic Professor? That way they could learn about something other than the Goblin Wars. When are we going to find out what Harry ad Draco really look like? Why doesn't Severus want to go on and remove the charm? Why doesn't he want the staff to know that Harry and Draco are his sons? What are their real names? Did Lucius know that Draco is really Severus' son? Does Lucius even know where Draco's at and do he even care? Please update something soon. It's been a really long time since you've posted anything.
| Sequel chapter 24 . 12/12/2012
Sequal please or update
| Fyreheart chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
No explanations? He treated one son like crap for the entire year and favored the other. He allowed one to grow up in a household of abusive sadists while the other was a pampered prince. And he just tells them like that? With no explanation? No apologies? Just tells them to go to bed in HIS quarters where they have no possessions at all? And they're expected to just believe this and meekly comply?
| honksfan4life chapter 24 . 5/22/2011
update soon. I enjoyed this story so far.
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 24 . 1/28/2011
I really hope that you'll one day continue this story, because it is so cute! So why doesn't Snape want to take off the charm right now? Why did Harry almost instantly fall away from Draco and Snape once he was in the Tower? Will he still believe that his relationship with his friends is stronger than his relationship with his family at the end of the summer? Will we find out what the boys look like and what their real names are?
Hope to read more!
| Griffin Raven chapter 23 . 11/1/2010
Both Harry and Drake have a lot of significant changes to try and adjust to over a very short period of time. So its very believeable and understandable that they would be unconsc-iously testing the boundaries in regards to there newly re-discovered father. Especially in light of how Severus had to pretend to actively dislike Harry because he was the boy-who-lived and was a Gryffindor. How will the newly rediscovered family deal with there family issues once the new term begins in september? Especially if Voldemort "Tom" has radically altered his intentions towards the wizarding world in general?
Do the glamour charms just hide the boys true appearance, or does it also work on there personality traits, or skills that they inherited from there parents? Will Harry and Drake being changing there names when the appearance glamour is finally taken off, and will they be resorted? How will either of Harry and Drake's friends react to there being twins sons of Severus and Lily Snape? I guess the fact that both boys are twins, is probably why they were drawn together, and the confusion of this caused them to continually fight? The parental bond the boys have to there father Severus, might also be why Harry wanted Severus's approval despite the way he treated Harry throughout the year during potions?
How will Severus (and Tom) deal with the child abuse issues that both Harry and Drake have? In light of both boys reluctance to talk properly about the child abuse...will Severus find them a healer or a journal to write things in? Or will he use another form of media to help the boys deal not only with the child abuse, there confusion over being a twin and rediscovering a father?
| Farandole chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
"Wonder Twins power, activate!" Ok, its got my attention. lol
| Griffin Raven chapter 24 . 3/3/2010
Wow...what an absolutely awesome story. I do so love stories were Severus is revealed to be Harry's father. But this one goes one step better, by Harry having a twin...Draco. I do think that both twins (though perhaps not in the same way) are going to have a few minor issues adjusting to having a loving/caring parent, or even an adult who "can" be relied upon. At these Draco did have Lucius and Narcissa to depend upon, even if they were the most ideal parents.
I do think that Draco did at least know that they loved him...he certainly never wanted for any material items. He did also have Severus as his "godfather" to depend upon, before it was revealed he was his father. But poor Harry, never had anyone/or an adult that he could fully depend upon. Instead he lived in a hostile environment and suffered from neglect, belittlement, child abuse from the very moment that he was found upon the Dursleys doorstep. So its understandable that Harry has many issues/or insecurities and perhaps a lack of trust in adults, low self-esteem are just a few of his problems. Although Harry seems to have great difficulties in sharing his thoughts/worries to an any adult even his father. He doesn't seem to have the same problems with his twin Draco...though there are the lingering amonistry that built-up between them since they first met in diagon alley which was also the cause of many of there fights (physical, magical or verbal). I do feel that once Harry and Draco's glamour is removed then Harry might finally "fully" believe (intellectually and in his heart) that Severus is his father and that Draco is his twin. Especially if the boys look alike, or share similarities with there father.
Does Harry have any lingering "anger" at who left him at the Dursleys? Or why his father Severus never rescued him before he turned 11yrs?
| JWOHPfan chapter 24 . 2/26/2010
It's a great story, but it's been 4 years! Any plans to finish or even update?
| the overcomer chapter 24 . 2/24/2010
aw... severus is so sweet...
| Jamie Jones chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
I love this story but can you make this much longer like past 24 chapters.
Please write more chapters and I will be checking all the time to see if their are more chapters or at least a sequel or 2.
Well it was nice talking to you. I am hoping to see more chapters if I don't see any chapters or sequels I will be talking to you again.
Jamie R. Jones
| Sarah Connor chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
I love this story and I hope that you will put in more chapters and make a sequel. I can't wait or just write a book. I have fun with this story and it makes my imagination much more excellent. Well bye for now!