Reviews for Spider-Quirk
Galaload chapter 9 . 12/20/2021
I can't wait for more of this story it will definitely be fun
aGnamZer0 chapter 9 . 12/7/2021
Honestly, Peter obviously would have much prefered the Support class seeing how his eyes brightened. Why didn't he take the chance? Because of Mandalay?

This fic is so good and yet so frustrating.
aGnamZer0 chapter 8 . 12/7/2021
I was already annoyed during the entrance exam, but why the heck do they refuse he uses his web shooters? That's unfair! That's like saying Aizawa can't use his scarf. Plus, some people's quirks are not suitable for combat and are better with support equipment. Some heroes, focus even more on equipment than on their quirks. Forbidding the use of supporting items is stupid and unfair for many kids who want to get into U.A. And now, they even refuse he uses it while in class.

So, to resume, they forbid him to use HIS two suits. They forbid him to use HIS web shooters. They refused to make a suit to his specifications due to budget. Honestly, the more I read, the less I understand why Peter is willing to remain here.
aGnamZer0 chapter 7 . 12/7/2021
I'm getting frustrated to be honest. Why does Peter stay at U.A. or in Japan? Wasn't his goal to revive Karen and find a way back home? But here, he has yet to even TRY to fix her and now he's not even allowed to use HIS suits? At his place, I would have left long ago. He doesn't want to become a Pro Hero. He thinks it's silly and I agree with him. Why would one need a licence to help others?

Also, it's funny Power Loader made this offer, because I was actually thinking the same for quite some time now. Being in the Hero Course won't really help Peter, but if he went into the support one, he would have all the material to tamper with his suits to his hearts' desires.

And finally, I had hoped for once there wouldn't be romance, but now you tell me that not only there will be, but it will be a harem? I hate harems! Why do all authors feel that protagonist need a damn harem? With what happened so far, I suppose Uraraka and Kendō will be members of it. Possibly even Mandalay if she isn't just a guardian or sister-like figure. And honestly, it completely ruins all the pleasure I have reading this fic.
aGnamZer0 chapter 6 . 12/7/2021
Did I dream it – nightmare it really – or did Peter call Ten'ya 'cool'? Please, tell me Peter won't become a close friend of this guy, he's the ONE character I hate the most in BNHA.
aGnamZer0 chapter 5 . 12/7/2021
Honestly, I don't understand Aizawa's thing with Peter being a vigilante and thus not ready to save people or take criminals. It's like he's saying as long as you didn't get to a hero school, you're not competent enough to get on the field. But that's bullshit, and he should know it. Peter beat him. Peter hold on against Muscular. And he's obviously good. So all his bullshit is starting to annoy me. Same for the Pussycats, the fact he was able to subdue two pro heroes who are used to fight together should go a long way proving he's already hero worthy.

I know it's a consequence of their society, but Aizawa as a night hero hero should know better.
aGnamZer0 chapter 4 . 12/6/2021
I wonder if the suit is able to take another form instead of a case. Maybe an accessory or a shirt, like Tony's Mark L (you know, the nanotech one he put with just a touch on his chest when fighting Maw and Cull Obsidian alongside Doctor Strange). Because a case is way too easy to get stolen in my opinion.
aGnamZer0 chapter 3 . 12/6/2021
I hope Aizawa and the rest won't find out his identity so easily. Peter better not remove the suit.
aGnamZer0 chapter 2 . 12/6/2021
Oh, so Peter comes back to his roots and goes into photography, huh?
aGnamZer0 chapter 1 . 12/6/2021
You know, I'm pretty sure Karen is in-built to the suit. Sure, there are external back up servers, but there is a version of her in the suit. It's mentioned in the movies and in the wiki. That's why Karen 'died' when Peter's suit was destroyed. He got a replacement with E.D.I.T.H., but she isn't Karen. And well, otherwise, how do you think Karen would have worked at the other side of the universe, fighting Thanos?

That aside, great start!
EnteTheSlayer chapter 9 . 12/6/2021
Cool story, keep writing
wolfwind42 chapter 9 . 12/5/2021
I love this fanfiction. Please update. You left on a cliffhanger and I want to know what happens next.
wolfwind42 chapter 4 . 12/5/2021
The "cheap cop out" wasn't bad at all. I could believe he ran out of oxygen. It's a skin tight suit after all. Sure, it was a little cheap, but it was at least believable, and that's what counts.
Vivi chapter 9 . 11/27/2021
Awesome, I'm looking forward to the USJ fight next chapter :)
Grecia chapter 9 . 11/22/2021
I'm super excited to read your fanfic, it's great! It has a perfect crossover balance! Please don't stop, I hope the next one will soon see Peter kicking his ass.
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