Reviews for Spider-Quirk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I CANT WSIT fOR THE NEXT CHAPTERThis story isla amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let me start off by apologizing lol. It's been a while. I've been busy, lol. But I'm here for it now! Please forgive me if I have forgotten anything. 'Getting hit with explosion after explosion makes a guy thirsty.' Hahahahahahaha I personally prefer the red-and-black. It seems to fit more with this version of Spider-Man. Hmmm, I find it strange that UA is so against Peter creating his webs. What if he tries to sell them? They are stronger than rope/nylon. Why are Teachers and Parents capitalized, lol? Ah, so they were seeing what Peter could do without them. Makes sense, and he should definitely learn to not rely on them (learning martial arts, for example), but they are one of the things that make him, well, him. I almost forgot about the whole Mr. Stark storyline. Hehehehe, I cannot wait to see how it goes! It'd be funny if some of the teachers (Aizawa) go to one of Peter's closer friends (Midoriya/Uararaka) and tell them to try and help Peter realize Mr. Stark is evil or something. Like a support group that Peter does not realize he's being treated for. An after-school club for Hero Support is a great way yo have Peter be involved in that without removing him from the Hero class. Spider-Frog, Spider-Frog. Does whatever a- I'll stop now. Love that Peter uses the old 'made-you-look' trick! Okay, I am all for harassing Bakugou and putting him in his place, but I doubt that Aizawa would specifically point out one student's flaws with everyone else present. 'Who has glasses.' Hahahahahahaha. Love it. But that also means you should be able to deduce who else voted for Momo, yes? Hey, puny is the other guy! I wonder if Momo could make his web fluid... So I guess Iida's not going to become president in this version? Love that 'Peter' is now 'Spider-Man' when he puts on the suit. It would be fun if in the future Peter gets infected with a Quirk-related virus and it speeds up his mutation, turning him into Man-Spider. Creative criticism: Maybe, whenever Peter uses his spider-sense, type 'shshshshshshpstpstpstpst' or something since it echoes in his head. This'll also allow for us to know if it is being activated (and, theoretically, could be used in the future by having Peter think he's got a tingle, but doesn't actually). Cannot wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just watched the new Spiderman recently so I was definitely happy to see that I had a couple chapters of this to look forward to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay I am liking what I am seeing. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ya see No Way Home yet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah yes, pile on the shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() peter dies, saves people, tells people about tony stark, they mistake stark for a villain or some shit, they ban him from using his suits. are you done shitting all over peter's life yet? I'm getting strong hints of Darth Marrs and that is not a compliment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more of this story it will definitely be fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, Peter obviously would have much prefered the Support class seeing how his eyes brightened. Why didn't he take the chance? Because of Mandalay? This fic is so good and yet so frustrating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was already annoyed during the entrance exam, but why the heck do they refuse he uses his web shooters? That's unfair! That's like saying Aizawa can't use his scarf. Plus, some people's quirks are not suitable for combat and are better with support equipment. Some heroes, focus even more on equipment than on their quirks. Forbidding the use of supporting items is stupid and unfair for many kids who want to get into U.A. And now, they even refuse he uses it while in class. So, to resume, they forbid him to use HIS two suits. They forbid him to use HIS web shooters. They refused to make a suit to his specifications due to budget. Honestly, the more I read, the less I understand why Peter is willing to remain here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm getting frustrated to be honest. Why does Peter stay at U.A. or in Japan? Wasn't his goal to revive Karen and find a way back home? But here, he has yet to even TRY to fix her and now he's not even allowed to use HIS suits? At his place, I would have left long ago. He doesn't want to become a Pro Hero. He thinks it's silly and I agree with him. Why would one need a licence to help others? Also, it's funny Power Loader made this offer, because I was actually thinking the same for quite some time now. Being in the Hero Course won't really help Peter, but if he went into the support one, he would have all the material to tamper with his suits to his hearts' desires. And finally, I had hoped for once there wouldn't be romance, but now you tell me that not only there will be, but it will be a harem? I hate harems! Why do all authors feel that protagonist need a damn harem? With what happened so far, I suppose Uraraka and Kendō will be members of it. Possibly even Mandalay if she isn't just a guardian or sister-like figure. And honestly, it completely ruins all the pleasure I have reading this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did I dream it – nightmare it really – or did Peter call Ten'ya 'cool'? Please, tell me Peter won't become a close friend of this guy, he's the ONE character I hate the most in BNHA. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I don't understand Aizawa's thing with Peter being a vigilante and thus not ready to save people or take criminals. It's like he's saying as long as you didn't get to a hero school, you're not competent enough to get on the field. But that's bullshit, and he should know it. Peter beat him. Peter hold on against Muscular. And he's obviously good. So all his bullshit is starting to annoy me. Same for the Pussycats, the fact he was able to subdue two pro heroes who are used to fight together should go a long way proving he's already hero worthy. I know it's a consequence of their society, but Aizawa as a night hero hero should know better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if the suit is able to take another form instead of a case. Maybe an accessory or a shirt, like Tony's Mark L (you know, the nanotech one he put with just a touch on his chest when fighting Maw and Cull Obsidian alongside Doctor Strange). Because a case is way too easy to get stolen in my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Aizawa and the rest won't find out his identity so easily. Peter better not remove the suit. |