Reviews for Spider-Quirk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, so Peter comes back to his roots and goes into photography, huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I'm pretty sure Karen is in-built to the suit. Sure, there are external back up servers, but there is a version of her in the suit. It's mentioned in the movies and in the wiki. That's why Karen 'died' when Peter's suit was destroyed. He got a replacement with E.D.I.T.H., but she isn't Karen. And well, otherwise, how do you think Karen would have worked at the other side of the universe, fighting Thanos? That aside, great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story, keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fanfiction. Please update. You left on a cliffhanger and I want to know what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The "cheap cop out" wasn't bad at all. I could believe he ran out of oxygen. It's a skin tight suit after all. Sure, it was a little cheap, but it was at least believable, and that's what counts. |
![]() ![]() Awesome, I'm looking forward to the USJ fight next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() I FINALLY READ IT! I'm super excited to read your fanfic, it's great! It has a perfect crossover balance! Please don't stop, I hope the next one will soon see Peter kicking his ass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue it's very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peter is 17, he just looks 14 so why is he so shy and and saying he is 14 |
![]() ![]() ![]() The not being part of your quirk thing is bullcrap. That's what support items are for. They're supposed to enhance you're quirk, and thats what the web shooters do |
![]() ![]() jeez, the pro hero’s really jumped to conclusions about tony, if only they asked peter about him he could tell them that he’s gone and they’ll think he died and is no longer a threat or something, or they’ll realize he’s a good guy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Oh yeah! We r at USJ! Time for Peter to kick butt! Yeah! Wonderful! Update immediately, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this is sooooo good! Ah! I couldn’t put it down. I do hope we get to see more of this story develop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore adore ADORE THIS STORY! I first read the crossover of Friendly Neighbor Spiderman here in FF and fell in love with the idea of Spidey in UA, and this fic absolutely embodies that idea. I like the changes you made to the story on how Peter gets to live with Mandaley and save Kota's parents, as well at the relationship he seems to be developing with Aizawa. I mean, I never really like the blatant favoritism that All Might has on Midoriya, while I like the equality Aizawa displays with his students, and seeing him here first been annoyed by Peter but then realizing his potential and the fact that he is a good kid by heart is refreshing. That part when he told Power Loader to basically "Back off, he is MY student!" was hilarious! In regards to the fights and power displayed by Peter I think you actually nailed it, Peter is powerful but not All Might powerful, at least in strength (yet), I like that he has his webshooters back, they were clearly putting wayyy too many tabs on him to be honest. I hope he can wear his Iron suit in the future, that one is so cool, or maybe he can made a new one with the help of powerloader and Mei. About the romantic pairings, I kinda like the couple he could make with Uraraka, he is obviously going to be her crush here instead of Midoriya and that is nice, that one has been done way too many times. I can also see the potential with Mei, all though she might be a bit TOO enthusiastic, and his friendship with Kendo might bee something too. Now, this last chapter got me HOOKED, I love how he warned them all with his spider sense, and the fact they didn't belive him, I think Aizawa is going to have to acknowledge that later, like not apologize maybe, but to sayhey, we should have listen to you". That Peter jump into action is something that I would absolutely expect from him, he has previous experience fighting baddies, and any hero with experience will know that caught the villains while they are distracted is the best thing, and Aizawa was clearly going to do that if not for Peter intervention lol. I like when badass characters show their strength in front of other people, so I DEFINITELY enjoy seeing Peter kicking ass in front of the rest of the class, if they didn't believe he was all that powerful before they are definitely going to believe it now, and to see him taking down a whole ass army of villains even! I can't wait to see how the next chapter will play out, the 3 main villains, Shigaraki, Kurogiri and Nomu are still a problem, but I guess this means that the kids are not going to be separated? Like, there is no point if the lesser villains are defeated, which could mean that they are going to stay and watch the rest of the fight (I hope) or are going to be evacuated. Is All Might even going to appear? It will be cool seeing Aizawa, Peter and 13 fight against Nomu though! More opportunities for Aizawa and the rest to see Peter abilities for sure! Even if Aizawa already knows he is powerful and resourceful, this will be even better to cement the idea that Peter has all it takes to be the best hero there is! Man, this was a long ass review, but I just finished reading the whole story in a single day and I'm pumped! Greetings from Perú! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is fire. Don’t abandon and keep the chapters coming |