Reviews for Spider-Quirk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the chapter! |
![]() ![]() Loved this chapter, really enjoyed the way you wrote Peter fighting against the LOV :) |
![]() ![]() I know you’re working of visionless but will this story be updated anytime soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() cheap cop out? no sir no, it's more cheap means there's still value, what you did is downright negative. so far the only ugly scar on this (so far) nice story... man and I thought vigilante story would be nice... anyways |
![]() ![]() When’s the new chapter D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta admit, I am really getting pissed at the heroes take on Tony. I hope Peter gets to go apeshit defensive on his brilliant mentor who saved the goddamn galaxy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do have to hand it to you, at least you know how to tell a cohesive story all things considered. |
![]() ![]() ![]() However, I have to hand it to you, at the very least you know how to make a cohesive story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does he need to attend school or UA? My Hero fanfic authors have stuck in your heads that the plot of every My Hero fanfic must revolve around that damn school when the universe of My Hero can be more than that. I mean think of what you're doing. Because of this fixation, you de-aged the main character so he could attend. What's next? Isekai Dumbledore and then de-age him so he can attend in his adolescence? Tunnel Vision. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Friend seriously stop taking SO LONG TO UPLOAD CHAPTERS that in the end one as a reader will lose interest because it doesn't really seem like you forgot about the fanfic, besides I don't understand how it takes A FUCKING YEAR AND A HALF to upload a chapter and even with errors PLEASE CHANGE YOUR STORY IT'S GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() The writing is getting bad as the fic goes on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Changing peter's age without a reasonable explanation as to how it happened is ruining this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a little something bothering me, idk if you fix it in later chapters or not, but I’m here at C4. Not sure if English is your first language or not, but it’s something that’s been bugging me. It’s ‘fifteen’ not ‘fifth teen’. Aside from the occasional spelling (happens to everyone, no big deal), as well as grammatical errors, I do really like what you’ve done so far. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful chapters but I just want to comment that Peter shouldn't have the knowledge of shoto flames as he was always using ice in season 1 |