Reviews for Spider-Quirk |
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![]() ![]() Good story. Letting you know that you have chapter 10 labeled as chapter 11. |
![]() ![]() I missed this sooooo much! I’ve been waiting for this story for a while and I love it! Thank you for making this story I really needed a good fic to read! This one is a favorite for me! |
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![]() ![]() 9 month 9MONTH! PLEASE UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realize I didn't say anything good that you do have about the story even though I said some things that bothered me I want to say that you have a somewhat compelling story it was able to drag in this many of us to read up to the latest update that means you had a narrative strong enough to keep us reading and that is a good trait to have. You have a decent writing sense that kept me hooked during the entire story and you should be proud! They say practice makes perfect and the more practice you do the better your writing skills get and your style of writing will develop and grow |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is enjoyable to read and just an gold star too you. For doing a such great job on presenting/captering how Spider-man(Tom holland) would act if this were to happen. (In my opinion) I like the relationship between Sosaki/Mandalay and Peter! How slowly releasing that she starting to warm up to him and maybe wanting to have him in her life. (as a son!) While on the other side Peter likes Sosaki but doesn't fully trust her or anyone yet. I like that in a way, because of how that reminds me of Peter having trouble telling the truth to aunt May. I'm very curious on how you are planning on going forward with this arc/novel. Just again really great story, hope that everything is going well for you! And see you later! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just another story stick to Canon, trying hard to mix little event in Canon too hard, no direction, no main plot point |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is good in a okay way but it needs a lot of cleaning and revisions and plot reminders |
![]() ![]() ![]() It feels weird when convos of peter hooking up with the girls happen cause then you remember he is older then them just his body is de aged it seems awkward for Peter but creepy from the Reader's view... very creepy |
![]() ![]() All caught up! I hope a new chapter will be here soon. |
![]() ![]() This is AWESOME I really love spider man and this is the first crossover fic with him in MHA and I looove it. I'm really excited to see what the media says about him. Is Stain gonna come into the picture I really want to see him interact with Peter. Especially since Peter is from a time where there were real heroes who didn't do it because it was a profession. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good SpiderMan x MHA fanfic and I can’t wait to read more but just to ask is this going to become PeterXUraraka I’ve seen the signs but I honestly hope you don’t personally I’m not into romance in my crossover fanfics and I don’t know why but it feels more fitting for it to be Midoriya, someone else or no one but it is your fanfic though not mine and if you want to and do go through with it I’ll still read but I hope you consider |
![]() ![]() Yeah their not gonna finish the fanfic. Guess I’ll have to do it myself somehow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Updateeeeeeee Made fucker! |