Reviews for Spider-Quirk
AbandonatoSoul chapter 1 . 12/18/2018
OMG, I really want to see how the pros are going to hunt Peter.
Im confident that Present Mic is going to find out what happend to Aizawa, and hes going to make fun of him for the rest of Aizawas life. I'm dying for seen how Peter adapts in this new world and impacts the BNHA timeline. (Please dont do romance, develop the characters.) Love your story so far. :D
JLyman chapter 2 . 12/18/2018
Not gonna lie; you made a very good first impression for this story. The quality and plot is very interesting. In my opinion, I have not seen that many Spider-Man crossover fanfics that feature MCU Spider-Man. You wrote Peter Parker’s character perfectly.

However, the only issue that needs to be worked on is grammar errors. There are some sentences that are left unfinished.

But other than that, you nailed it!Keep up the good work,

Ashura the Infinite chapter 1 . 12/18/2018
I like this a lot, I keep needing to remind myself its MCU spidey and not comic spider-man, but otherwise keep going. I like the simple demonstration of his strength via eraser head fight. A good read that went a tad fast at first but slowed to a normal pace as you keep reading. Good stuff
BlueSynth chapter 1 . 12/18/2018
Aw man, I wish Peter said "With Great Power comes Great Responsibility." That's one of the only gripes I have with the MCU Spider-Man. They act like the incident with Uncle Ben never happened. Other than that, THIS IS SO GOOD! The fic captures Peter's character, and tells the story well. I am so excited for the next chapter! Great work!
Maximum Rhapsody chapter 1 . 12/18/2018
you know it would be good to see other spiderman villains in that world, but since you are using the MCU spiderman I think that it will not be possible, but it's fine, although it would be nice to add the Defenders (Daredevil, Jessica Jones, Luke Cage and Iron Fist) although they are from the Neflix series, or perhaps other heroes or villains who died or were erased by Thanos and the gems of infinity. By the way, who would be the Spiderman couple, my votes would be Melissa Shield, Mei Hatsume or Itsuka Kendo.
Taranodongirl1 chapter 1 . 12/18/2018
Leo Ford chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
Pls update. Love it
free man writer chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
Alright you got me hooked I'm down
The Overlord's 8th Bride chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
Absolutely amazing story. I think you did very well in keeping everyone in character. I can't wait to see the next update :D
gaming-is-served chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
i love this so much, i want to read more of this
redskin122004 chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
this is the first Spiderman story that I thoroughly enjoy reading. keep it up!

You done everything right as far as setup goes, and very impressive in keeping Peter in character.

as far as nitpicking goes, I thought Karen was integrated into the suit? otherwise, keep going, it's really good
bitsplay chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
buen capitulo
Jaeker chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
This story looks really promising. Cant wait to see what happens next! Great first chapter ( and I hope beyond hope this doesnt become one of the few stories that are really great and end up being abandoned after a few chapters...)!
Gamelover41592 chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
okay this is pretty awesome but I do have to ask even though they left it out of MCU why didn't you have Spiderman tell Aizawa his best quote?
sadieclock chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
I like how you started this, and as far as BNHA x MCU x-overs go, this is the first one I've seen where The SnapTM sends the hero(es) to alternate dimensions, usually it's just some random portal. I also like that this is 100% mcu spidey.
I'm really interested to see if any other MCU characters (heroes & bad guys) god Snapped to the BNHA too or not.
Definitely a premise with a lot of potential!
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