This was all so beautifully written. I’m glad that they’ll be moving on, tgatgives Bella a chance to move forward within herself too.
Thanks for sharing this story and these characters with us. What a joy it’s been to read. :)

Beautifully written, loved that they got her home safely.

Poor Bella, it was good to hear from her though.

So good with the descriptive writing. I felt all of that as if I were right
there with them, willing her on.

I’m so glad his family is there for him. I hope Charlie makes it there ok.

I’m starting to panic for her, for them. I’m worried time May not be on their side. I’m hoping Edward doesn’t leave it too late to act, if need be.

Eeeek, it’s not looking good for her. I’m hoping Alice saw this and they’re all on their way.

Lordy! The thought of a tsunami scares the bejeeezus out of me. We’ve been taught to look for that pull back to the ocean and beware.

Love the ending.

My husband read this chapter and cried while holding my hand. He said it brought back memories when he almost lost me. He said he felt helpless, like edward. I was kept in a coma in order to give my body time to calm down.
Thanks for a great story

Can't... see - started the tears again.
Another brilliant and emotional chapter.

Cried at this chapter - so very hard to read.
You've done an amazing job of portraying everyone's emotions.

So glad that Edward found Bella and she's no longer alone. Her injuries sound horrific but at least Edward will be able to help her.

A very different story!

Fantastic story :)