I love that you added an additional chapter. Your descriptions of Bella’s vision made sense along with her frustration. But I also appreciate her gratitude for being alive. This was a realistic portrayal of long term injury and a true example of loving someone in sickness and in health.

Nicely done! You did it justice!

Literally amazing. I love the aftermath of Bella’s injuries and I love how they are portrayed in this. You put real emotion in this and I really appreciate it. You are a wonderful writer and I hope you continue writing stories like this

Great ending to a fantastic story. Bella could've easily told Edward to change her at anytime but she held fast and stayed human through all of her pain, but she didn't. Now she adapting to her brand of normal and still. Take care, Trisha :}

Me encanta

This is such a good story! Thanks for the bonus chapter! Amazing as always!

Exelente historia eras la única persona que ha escrito algo así te felicito

This is probably the fifty millionth time I’ve read this story, and Bella saying “I’m ok” to everything has got me in my feelings.

Needs that bonus to really ties up the loose ends.

thank you for sharing your story.

Yes please to the bonus chapter! V cool fic

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OMG! I wonder if Alice saw anything? If they are on their way or sent help? OMG! Is he going to change her? I have to go and find out! o.o

OMG! O.O This is...WOW!

OMG! O.O

This was so original. You truly brought a "what if " story to life. All the plot elements worked together so well. I would welcome a future take as I feel your story lends itself to one. Thank you for writing a extremely entertaining story. Best Wishes.