Reviews for Just a plan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i dunno if it was something that was 'the thing to do' at the time when this was written but how and why did basically every fanfic writer at the time use left alignment even when it caused sentences to be constantly broken? also it's 'felt giddy' not 'felled giddy' lols |
![]() ![]() Uhm, Ami, Makoto you don't necessarily need to know that sailor. I bet there are hundreds if not thousands of redheads (artificial and not) who bought spices recently... |
![]() ![]() Haven't held my breath and don't know if you will get back to see this. Or even have an associated E-Mail any more. Its been 14 years. 10 since your last story on this site was updated. Will the Nerima Visit ever show up here? Was it even made? Thank you for making a fun story, still would like to see more. Daniel Thomas Stack AKA Spokavriel at yahoo. |
![]() ![]() Almost 12 years ago you said you were thinking about a sequel, well I hope you are still going to do it because it needs one to answer questions like... Will Ranma act more feminine when in girl form? Who sees the photos first Akane or Nabiki? Is Sapphire an official Senshi or an honorary one? Will Ranma move in with his Mother? Do Ranma & the girls now having modeling carriers? Will Ranma meet the other outers? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic Needs a sequel Deserves a sequel I can see it now... Ranma declares he's moving in with his mother & with her permission brakes the engagements (Ukyo or Konatsu adopted) & he got his amazon marriage annulled becoming Shampoo's sister/brother Usagi has dream meets her Mother who tells her how to create new senshi, Sapphire becomes a real senshi Reveal curse to other senshi New villain(s) New school (as boy or girl) New job as model New relationship (maybe Ranma x Usagi) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, so vacation ends well, it's not a new lifestyle. Cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() ranma would never decide to use their uniform just like that. Right? Right? Whatever ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahah ;p great story love every bit of it ;p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and I do like the ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *has a serious face* "They are coming." *thwak!* "Owwwww!" That was hilarious! Didn't know that was a reference, though. Really great fic, i'm enjoying it a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lot of fun, and nice to see a completed story |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story ne |
![]() ![]() I had fun. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() I like your idea it seems very interesting. You make the odd spelling error here and there, or use an incorrect word sometimes. I would advise proof reading your work or have someone else do it for you. I'm going to try and continue reading now but I don't know if I will be able to for long because already your lack of abbreviations is grating on my nerves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic! Hope you get time to write something more sometime. |