Reviews for Il Profumo del Mio Paradiso |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this wonderful New tale |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! I love how you describe the scene and capture every emotion, every reaction precisely. Thank you for sharing your wonderful words. |
![]() ![]() An absolute delight! I love the detail you put into the story line. Can't wait to see what comes next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to more! I loved the HBO miniseries The Young Pope and your story also piques my imagination. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating this fascinating story as I was missing it terribly. Hope all is well with you. This chapter brings us up to the first chapter, where a very evil Cardinal Voltera was about to encounter Archbishop Masen! Giuseppe's description of the Campo and Father Edward were so incredibly detailed and vivid that I could actually picture myself there experiencing everything myself. Your writing is absolutely amazing and I can't wait to see what happens next. Take care, Trisha :} |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh. I can't wait for more!. Love the characters and plot. Great reading. |
![]() ![]() Your writing is so professional...you deserve a lot more reviews. I am enjoying this story immensely, and I look forward to your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truely delizioso, my friend. The way you bring your scenes to life, rich in atmosphere, colours and scents, gestures, traits and details - I love every moment! You're creating a world full of mystery and secrets and I want to devour all your words at once. At the same time I want to take my time, to take it all in, to bath in the warmth of the Roman sun, the agony of a suffering soul, the bittersweetness of an aging couple's love. You are truely an inspiration and the award for newcomer author could not have been placed in any better hands 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get so sucked into these chapters! Fantastic! I know absolutely zero about the Catholic Church, so I feel this is educational. I’m so looking forward to learning more about Edward. And I’m trying to remember The Thorn Birds! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You mentioned that Cardinal Cullen was American. Did I miss Edward's nationality? I'm intrigued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BIG feeling of dread picturing Cardinal Voltera slithering towards our beloved Edward. The love Giuseppe and his wife share is wonderfully described. I hope you don't kill off his Pina until after she has enjoyed at least a few seasons of fresh flowers in their home! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What beautiful writing! The description of the little secret garden, the conversation between Edward and Giuseppe...very well written indeed. I had to go back to the previous chapter to see I hadn't missed anything though. Edward has never been mentioned before, right? There has been such a long gap from the time Aro left, of course... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh... Aro's ambition has no limits. I want to know more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg... Did she jump the Bell tower? Now, Aro is lonelier in this world. Great writing! |