Reviews for For Earth and All Her Colonies |
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![]() ![]() Okay the blaming “capitalism” is a weak ass excuse for children. Focus on life and don’t worry about this hobby of yours. The system of actually working for capital (capitalism) has worked for millennia, and only the lazy seek shit like socialism which has caused the largest systematic mass murders in history. Just focus on life and forget this if it’s so hard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me reading this : well shit now i got to find a new story to read but in really focus on your self your personal life is more important then some random ass story |
![]() ![]() ![]() all good, while i would love to see this story continue, personal life comes first, in regards to the Turian carrier, in my mind i saw it as the UNSC designating an unknown ship as a carrier maybe after seeing fighters leave it, dont see why they were "nitpicking" you over it as there are other authors that have done the same given more ship variants to the citadel factions its not a bad thing at all but like you said its a whit if scenario, plus it is fiction, i have always hated critics going of on a book movie or even fanfiction story over how its nit "realistically possible" or not "scientifically possible", it is fiction its not real in the first place so why does it have to make sense, if the story sounds good and you enjoy it ignore the parts that you dont like |
![]() ![]() ![]() AightI am enjoying. the story, but I'm having a hard time with how you're writing the council races (especially the council scene). Now, before i start my little rantThe story as a whole is good. Your writing, while a bit unpolished (which is absolutely fine, it's fanfiction) is solid. The characters on the Alliance side are interesting and well written. Battles are interesting, and I'm enjoying it as a whole. With that said. The council? They're.. retarded? The initial attack and all that I getthat's one commander going full retard and charging in without even trying to think it through. But the conversation and thoughts of the council paints them as straight up idiots, I'm afraid. Especially Sparatus response to Turians having to pay reparations. Though, in my mind that wouldn't even be part of the conversation at this pointthey've literally just poked a beehive of unknown size, and it's not cute little fucking honeybees either. First priority isn't who's gonna pay reparations or that they're looking forward to being "Council #1" again with all the new technology and potential territory gains. It just feels like you're not even trying on them, like they're the classical villain without and depth and intelligence. Which is disappointing, because you've shown in you writing that you're more than good enough of a writer to do them justice. (And I'm sorry if I'm being overly harsh ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() “ UNSC Infinity, along with her sister ship UNSC Eternity are commissioned into the fleet. Designed during the Great War with the intent of being pure weapons” Couldn’t be more wrong. They were meant to be ark ships incase humanity lost the war, to ferry survivors to a distant system to rebuild |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sure, GADPELLAEON, take your time. Just make sure that the end result is perfect. To be honest, I was binging through the chapters, and this chapter hit me like a brick. Totally destroyed the mood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate work life as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was going to say that I understood and you could take all the time you wanted… until you started blaming muh evil capitalism for your troubles. I’m really not in the mood to deal with commies right now, so i will just say this; communism doesn’t work. Capitalism, flawed as it is, does and it isn’t going alway. Cope and move on. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey man, don't sweat it. Life hits us all like that. Just glad to know you're still up and about. :) If you are going to continue that story, Thanks! That would be awesome! If not, thank you still for the content you've written and shared with us. Many of the scenes are memorable and compelling and I've loved that part of Chief's homecoming ceremony from start to finish. Anyways, hope things get better for you mate, take care and Godspeed! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was certainly interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even after ever thing they still deny all folt in there actions and say they must rule the galaxy be its there right |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking turians why is garrus the only one who’s not a gian fucking dick |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just looked at the comment section and MOST of the people there are just as retarded as you the writer of this shit fic are and I hope you lose your knee caps you utter moronic imbecile as anyone with common sense knows that Mass Effect is as weak as wet tissue paper when compared to any other fadoma nd I also hope you your hands get broken so that people with common sense like me don't have suffer anymore from your stupidity |