Slow down if needed and take your time. We can wait for you to update the story even if it takes longer due to illness or just a lack of will to write

Great chapter, more please! You’re one of the only Dokkaebi stories I’ve found

Don’t worry about having to write filler chapters, they’re sometimes needed to progress story. From the amount of views you say this is getting, people are obviously enjoying the story so all you have to do is just keep the story moving along. Besides, you’re nearing 100k words in what seems to be less than 15 chapters which is a major improvement compared to your older stories!

Love the story!

Liked the new addition mate, keep em going

I love this story

Absolutely amazing story so far. I’m glad that you’re one of the very few authors out of the 411 Rainbow Six Siege category that’s determined to make an amazing and long story for people to read. Can’t wait for all the chapters that you have planned coming out throughout the year, it’s going to be a great day when you finally hit six digits!

Bravo Jordan, take a break now. Writing 10k words in a week sounds like it would be a pain in the ass.

Great story so far. While a little bit of some of the time progression areas could be worked on, it’s still really good. I like it

I like the chapter, ready to read more.

Long time no see my friend

I remember reading some of your older stories, you definitely are a bit rusty but you’ve also improved in some ways in that year you were gone. It’s sorta sad seeing this story hasn’t gotten much attention yet but it’ll get there eventually partner.

I enjoy it decently so far, but I got one bit of criticism for you. Try and space out your sentences more. You have a lot of long and drawn out sentences which makes it awkward to read. Hope you continue this!

I’ve been waiting for a Dokk fanfic for a long time, pls continue this story