Reviews for Reluctant Ally
G Fawkes chapter 50 . 3/7
"Although many death eaters had died, some were not, and still active"
No. They are dead. You wrote that ALL death eaters DIED, screaming, with their dark mark burning through them. If they had a dark mark, they died. If they didn't have the Mark, they're not death eaters. They are SYMPATHIZERS, supporters, like minded, whatever.
Don't go back on something you wrote five or ten chapters ago, thinking we'll forget. I'm reading this in 2025, with no wait between writing blocks, muse issues, etc. Some are reading for three DAYS, not three years.
G Fawkes chapter 49 . 3/7
What Albus isn't catching on to is : it's not up to him to ACCEPT their decisions. They are the owners. They are the law of the school. No school board. No ministry interference. They're not ASKING him. They're TELLING him, nicely. "Here, sprinkle some sugar on this spoonful of hippogryff shit. You WILL be eating it, so you might as well make it taste better!"
G Fawkes chapter 41 . 3/7
Hehe! Hey kid. Get over it. Some of us have been disappointing women all our lives! Too small for some. Too big for some (?) To fast for most. Taking too long for my wife (again, ?) Find a good strip club, and have fun before you come home. (But avoid perfume and glitter at all costs)
Guest chapter 39 . 3/7
Each dorm has it's own "bathroom". There are no " common showers" where anyone would be showering with any but her own age group.
G Fawkes chapter 30 . 3/6
A snake sliding out of the toilet window. FOURTEEN FLOORS above the ground. Gryffindor is on the seventh floor. Harry's door has always (book Canon) been the top floor of the dorm tower, seven floors up from the common room. That's fourteen stories up, with a steep, dormer window, on a round stone tower, adjutting(?) off another larger, round, stone, tower.
Where in TF is the snake supposed to go?
I don't mean to be sarcastic, but things ought to be semi-realistic? No?
G Fawkes chapter 28 . 3/6
I don't think its appropriate that I'm imagining Emma Watson, as an almost 13 year old, naked.
I once googled her mom, to see if she was attractive. Apparently that is not where she got her looks.
G Fawkes chapter 27 . 3/6
And now, watch as BOTH of us transform into tigers, and chase your mangey ass around this townhouse!
G Fawkes chapter 14 . 3/5
And... Nope. No train tickets. No platform instructions.
G Fawkes chapter 14 . 3/5
Ha! We Ohio State fans have a hated rival we refer to as "That School up North", refusing to say it's real name. To the extent that, during the weeks leading up to the (American) football game, students go around and tape over every " M" they can find in and around campus, or Columbus proper. The _ichigan Wolverines v. Ohio State Buckeyes game is (supposedly?) the greatest rivalry in all of sports. I, of course, agree.
There are probably soccer hooligans who disagree.
SvenTheDecoy chapter 33 . 3/7
enjoying the story, but Harry guessing the basilisk password is just ridiculous
G Fawkes chapter 7 . 3/5
I guess if he didn't carry him in, he was sleeping on the couch?
Guest chapter 6 . 2/16
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Pillager61 chapter 52 . 1/28
Above average super Harmony. It was worth my time
Trld chapter 41 . 1/23
I made it this far but no…. Just no he’s confused and surely not ready for something so important. It’s just so wrong…thank you for a a new viewpoint on the family. But im going to have to leave it here.
Animeworld2.0 chapter 15 . 12/19/2024
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