Reviews for Reluctant Ally |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Headbastards, as I define them, are manipulative authority figures that think of the people that should be educating and nurturing as pawns and tools. They are sadistic pieces of agony for all society and they must pay the (*&(&()ing price by te end of great tales like this one. In simpler words, the Policy: HEADBASTARDS MUST DIE. If you insist on leaving your Headbastards alive, change the story to Drama/Angst/Horror and don't forget to wash your hands after typing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How late do you think puberty happens? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice aunt |
![]() ![]() ((Not at all interested in the "kiddie-sex" but I do appreciate how you've handled the subject in this story. H and Hr are just regular kids but their emotional closeness makes them want to be physically close - like cuddling up in bed together like puppies - but that cuddling naturally won't stay "puppy'ish" forever, and I like how you've had The Moms bring out The Books, lol)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story…an interesting take on the Dursleys, as well as other things. The plot moved along nicely, there was a good balance of dialogue and exposition, and the writing was well done, sucking the reader in and making us want to know what happened next (without resorting to too many cliffhangers). Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a bad story, enjoyed reading it but felt that Hermione was written as too grown up and bossy. She was pushing Harry a lot as he was still getting use to things and figuring things for himself. Liked the change in Petunia and family. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and currently on my third or fourth reread an interesting theory has popped up though… is it possible that Harry’s last bout of accidental magic may have confouded Petunia to be micet |
![]() ![]() ![]() The day the deatheaters died. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 哈哈哈哈 made in china ,魔法石,笑死我了,我们有好几个工厂在生产魔法石,长生不老!有人要买吗? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story up until this point, and I know nudity isn't the same thing as sex, and I am also aware that both teens and even preteens have sex... But, despite it not even being a graphic description I don't want to read about teens especially a teen that only just turned 13 having sex. And even if their bond is a factor it seems like a lot of the time Hermione was pushing Harry and not accepting or helping with his worries which also bothered me. You're a good writer but I will not be finishing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Petunia should be able to visit, she just can't show up by car or train or anything like that. The only thing holding her back would be her version to magical transportation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, I'm confused. In just the last chapter, or maybe the one right before it, Harry was saying that he was Lord Peverell because he could pick that one up when he turned 10 but couldn't become Lord Potter until 14... But now he says he is Lord Potter because of a loophole or something and he was able to become it right after he turned 10... Uhhm, when did that happen? Is he lying? Again, very confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What did Hermione's parents do during the whole visit? |