must say the Grunning's drills/Granger DDS connection is a clever one. Makes perfect sense but ive thought of it before. So far so good on the Dursley redemption, they are pretty cartoonish in canon and youve given them just a bit more pathos without excusing them completely.

13 is early, but not too early. i know someone who got somebody pregnant at 12.

13yrs old is too early. I love your stories, second time re-reading them but it really feels like Hermione pressed him into it.

It started out pretty good. I guess that explains the favsreviews. However, I gave up at chapter 32. This story just gets progressively cringe inducing the longer you read. Between the constant unnecessary descriptions of naked 1112 year olds and the lazy unimaginative plagiarism….. it’s a no for me. It would have been better left incomplete.

the characters in your fic talk like they're 30 or timetravellers that haven't spoken to a child in years , they keep arriving to the correct conclusions without any of what they would know leading them to that conclusion, the nudity you keep making sexual even if you deny it and it's just cringe inducing to read.

As someone wiser than I said: Naked is defenseless, nude is artistic…

As long as the characters are aware and fully understand that they aren’t ready for anything else yet, and as long as you don’t go there, then it’s not an issue, in my opinion….

I really liked how this fic was going, but I feel like you’re just concentrating on sex lately. The kids are 12 and 13, it’s a bit weird how intense you’re making it. I really hope the future chapters mellow out on it and starts concentrating on actual plot.

Good story keep more like this coming ️

Wonderful story! Keep up the great work!

Great story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it.

Nice story. Overall, I thought it was great. The sexing was a little young but it wasn't super graphic and was easy to skip past. The premise was somewhat original while still being comfortable like a pair of well-worn shoes. Thanks for sharing.

thx.

You had me until the blushing & "pretty" talk. They are 10 years old, let them be 10.

Yep, thats it for me. First chapters were nice, nuce premisses. But then started to get cringy. They can suddenly do incredible magic without wand, talk like 60 yo, but the worst is the 11yo talking about sex, and soulmate is a bad trope to me, incredible cringy, and also poorly written. Augusta can sense rings but Dumbledore cant. He is a senile old mand with bad intentions, so poorly written, and the old bad Ron is bad. Actually, i think just the first 2 chapters were good. But now its keep get worst at each chapter I cant reead anymore. Anyway thank you for sharing and I hope you have luck in uor future endeavours, but i think they will not be writting.

I’d read most of this earlier and am very glad to see that this story has now been completed. Read it again from the beginning and found it to be a calm and relaxing read for the most part. While I’ve no problems with the concept of nudity and kids developing strong feelings, I did feel a bit uncomfortable with Harry and Hermione acting on their feelings to the extent they did when so young. To each his/her own though. So that’s that. There were quite a few things that I liked about the story, such as Petunia’s change of heart, Vernon’s acceptance of Harry as part of their family, Dudley doing very well for himself, Harry feeling like he belonged, Hermione and Harry meeting early and being best friends, their power and success, Sirius being free, and the sidelining of the Weasleys and Dumbledore with very minimal bashing. I’m constantly looking for H/Hr stories and am glad to have your stories to read. Thanks.