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Above average super Harmony. It was worth my time

I made it this far but no…. Just no he’s confused and surely not ready for something so important. It’s just so wrong…thank you for a a new viewpoint on the family. But im going to have to leave it here.

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Def one of those feel good stories that is good to read any time.

I have to say I loved this its kept me entertained while sick in bed all day

You are really working hard to stay with Canon. Its rather sad actually.

I felt like I read two different stories... the first half and the next half are two completely different tones and not like a transition either... it became more and more idealistic and different from how Harry is portrayed... I did not like it... I just skimmed the last few chapters just to finish it. I liked it till first year. But from the second year, he just became passive. I extremely enjoyed the change in Petunia over time but you could have probably added an event that led to that initial push (maybe the event where he gets beaten half to death by Vernon or that they have to take him to the Doctor's, etc.) also Vernon's change needed more events to justify (in a story). Then there was all the knowledge he was reading, we never got to find out the benefits of him doing so much exercise (basically his power) - though on the other hand I liked that he was almost being safe throughout and used his brains to solve problems but his lordships and so on basically handed him everything on a silver platter... I would also have loved him being intelligent/knowledgeable but not wise and that was where dumbles could have put in his input compared to just showing a white flag like in this one... I would give it a 2 out of 5... not worth reading 100k words... you could have ended it at Ch 39...

Love a story where Dumbles LOSES!

When will some of the non marked idiots attempt to harm Harry or Hermione?

That’s funny!

Yea! Narcissa is saved!

Dumbledore’s more a hindrance than a help!

Hmm, hasn’t Sirius told Harry about Peter?

Maybe they can thin out the death munchers early and get Sirius free!