Great story! Thank you! but i still feel it deserved a couple of more chapters :D

So good! Sad for it to end!

a very wonderful story. loved it very much

1 Corinthians 15:26

I really enjoyed your story.

This chapter…

Seriously, I think you’re confusing 11 with 16! They are only ELEVEN YEARS OLD, FFS!

It seems I spoke too soon about dumbeldore in my last comment. I love a manipulative dumbles though.

This is an absolutely wonderful story. I love Dumbledore’s characterization. He is manipulative but he ultimately was able to admit he was wrong. I also love that even Vernon has come around to Harry. I really loved getting to see Marge be redeemed. I like stories where Marge has a redemption arc. I really loved the library books and your explainations on how the two arw able to aquire so many skills. While also being able to depend on a few others for help.

The only thing that has been jarring is that I am a little disturbed about the fact Hermione didn’t respect Harry’s boundaries and despite him voicing them seemed to plow right over them. They also really do seem very young to be having sex. I do wish the story had waited until they were at least 14. Or had the big birthday present be a hand job or something that I could actually imagine a stable middle school age couple doing. I hadnt minded them sleeping nude together. It is just that they were so young to have sex and Harry seemed forced, especially after having it mentioned several times he wasnt ready.

Loved it, well written and covering all the story very well!

Ughh i cant read anymore, ive held out as long as i could. Cuz you had an inteesting plot. However now uou are pushing boundries. Like Harry is clealr and Hermione is presureing him. Even maniulating him by saying she thinks the bond is pushing them. And its all very disconcerting to read. It just feels wrong. Ur writinf is good but now that Voldemort is gone it just feels like everything ur writing is hintinf at child pornography instead of a love story or even advancing rhe plot. There is nothing left and yet there is still five years of school and ten chaptwrs left. I feel like if i read im gonna be dissapointed but thank you for the fic it qas good while it lasted.

Teh clinical way in which hermione talks about sex is so unnerving. I realize shes unbothered but no girl is this unborthered or clinical. Like none. Its scary and its also very forward and weird for a 13 year old to ve like lets sleep baked and if u fucke me while were sleep oh well i expect it will happen for real at some point. “Shoulder shrug” that has to be the most u realistic thing about this fic, outside of the durselys being decent human beings. Like thats not as much of a strech as a 13 year old being like oh well if i lose my virginity in my sleep. Like WTF?

Well Harry’s not wrong lol

Seriously? What 12 year old acts like this, its a little too unrealistic. No 12 year old is this forward , and Hermione has gone from direct to extremely forward. It doesnt matter if shes almost 13 this is weird AF. Like why are you obsessed with the odea of two barely into puberty children being so sexually adventurous. Not to mention the fact that neither should feel comfortable with this. And i so fet the soul mates so they know they will be together. So why not? But no child would think like that even with all that. Its weird especialky considering neither are ready for more as they said. The idea that hermione is like yes harry i want u close to me and naked too , is absurd.

Months tbey are like 11 and 12 jesus H Christ! Like dont get me wrong i get it they basically are in love and yes most 11 and 12 year olds experiment if not have sex . But lets not be so hasty. Like 14 sure id accept it and not think twice especialky considering the longevity of their friendship/relationship but 11 and 12, perish the thought.

Gonna be honest, its such a strech and so flipping weird to see the Dursleys being decent human beings but i am quite enjoying it.